Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

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Beautiful Two Timer

Beautiful two timer....
Yes, that's you
You visit once and come again
to say hello or just to say
"Congrats your poem made the day!
Hooray! Hooray!"


Beautiful two timer....
I give applause
It takes time and effort
to come back again
It takes thoughtfulness 
and lots of kindness too
So, I want to say:
"Thank you!"

Beautiful two timer...
Make it three times, too
You're always welcome
whatever you do
For you're a dear friend
That's faithful and true

Hey, you two timer...
I love you! 

Eileen Manassian

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 6, 2016 at 8:32 AM Ugh! you nailed me! LOL! I totally thought this was something else...nice work! I've been away a while...very busy with work...heck I'm still in Korea now! But trying to get back in the swing of things -and still writing a bit. Great work here though! MC

Manmath Dalei September 10, 2016 at 3:45 AM Lovely poem, Eileen. U r always coming with some unique poem with ur own style. Loved it...........//:) hugs//Manmath.

Timothy Hicks September 3, 2016 at 11:24 PM This was sweet and unexpected, Eileen. Here I am thinking about something completely different ... haha. Thanks for stopping by and saying, "Hey!" on Facebook. I've been quite absent the last few months :(

Just James September 2, 2016 at 1:40 PM Sweet!

CayCay Godwin August 29, 2016 at 2:45 PM I am amused and impressed by the cleverness in this poem ... CayCay

James Inman August 28, 2016 at 6:22 PM I must apologize Eileen. I'm a two timer, actually I think its a lot more than that. Enjoyed your write.

Richard Lamoureux August 28, 2016 at 10:11 AM Good morning, hugs Rick.

Paul Callus August 25, 2016 at 10:52 AM You drew me in with the title, Eileen, for my mind hinted that two timers are not usually beautiful! But I totally agree with you with regards to these types of two timers. I appreciate all visits, yet a double visit is extra special. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux August 24, 2016 at 2:49 PM Ditto!

Richard Lamoureux August 24, 2016 at 8:45 AM Ha ha, not what I was expecting! You made me smile! Eileen Manassian August 24, 2016 at 9:34 AM :) I'm glad you read this one, Richard. You are MORE than a two timer to me! Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis August 24, 2016 at 2:32 AM The breeze from Cyprus touched your poetic genius which vivified your writing once again! Wonderfully done and a 7 dear, Eileen. Eileen Manassian August 24, 2016 at 9:34 AM Thanks, my dear esteemed poet. Yes, I have finally been able to write again. It was a long time away, but I think I am able to jump back in now. :) Thanks for the visit.

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2016 at 12:01 AM Two timer, three timer, four timer, five. all of us old "timers" here just tryin' to stay alive! This is cute. and who was THIS two timer specifically? Eileen Manassian August 24, 2016 at 9:36 AM Oh....two timers who a real dedication that is very sweet. Some of my friends are even more than two timers. I enjoy it when I get a visit and then my poem makes POTD and someone comes back to congratulate, or just comes to say, "I enjoyed reading this one again." It's extra special. Hugs, dear.

Viv Wigley August 23, 2016 at 11:02 PM Worth reading again, Eileen :) . Viv x Eileen Manassian August 24, 2016 at 9:36 AM HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.....VIV, you are funny! Enjoyed your MULTIPLE visits, dear. Hugs

Viv Wigley August 23, 2016 at 11:01 PM I really enjoyed this piece, Eileen, gave me a grin. Viv x Eileen Manassian August 24, 2016 at 9:37 AM First visit...thanks Viv! ;)

Viv Wigley August 23, 2016 at 11:01 PM How true. A lovely write, Eileen. Viv x Eileen Manassian August 24, 2016 at 9:37 AM Well, this surely makes YOU at two timer, Viv. Thanks a bunch! :) Glad you could jump in and enjoy a good time. Hugs

Jan Allison August 23, 2016 at 12:27 PM Made me smile Eileen lol. I think many of us can relate - I probably get less than 20% of the comments back than I make - I always try to reciprocate when I get a comment - I think soup need to encourage the new poets to comment back to the person I've noticed some write a reply above which doesn't get read by the person who made the original comment:-( hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner August 23, 2016 at 12:13 PM Such a delightful write, Eilene. I love the poem and I love you too! Although, I'm sure it's aimed at someone else. Lol I am so glad you are back posting your lovely poetry again. I have missed you!