Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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Beautiful Sunrise - the Whitney Style

~Beautiful  Sunrise~
( Whitney  Duet )


Sunrise shines
Appears again
Spreads around
Cover mountains
Sea,  above
Clouds softly pass
A band of seagulls  fly high.


The air's cool
And the sun's warm
Delightful
Wonderful spring
Warms my heart
Songbirds sings
His love shines upon my face.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012


January.11.2017


~Author's Notes:

The "Whitney" is a  syllabic poetry form or style, that was created by Betty Ann Whitney.The "Whitney" is also known as an American Asian Poem.

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Freddie Robinson Jr. January 19, 2017 at 8:45 AM Very sun drenched poetry. Very well done, Dorian. Has me soaking in the sun on this cloudy, Michigan winter day. Congrats on POTW. A wonderful, Whitney style poem. May love light your path always. Romantic Warrior

Marilyn Williams January 18, 2017 at 8:34 PM Whatever the style, I truly love this poem. Congrats on your POTW!

Manmath Dalei January 16, 2017 at 7:42 AM Lovely Imagery. Loved it.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 13, 2017 at 1:20 PM I like your poem.I seldom have seen a sunrise. But I have seen a lot of sunsets.Also beautiful to watch. You wrote a beautiful poem.

Jan Allison January 11, 2017 at 4:21 PM beautiful imagery Dorian I love watching the sun rise and set the colours are so stunning:-) hugs jan xx