Beautiful Springtime -The Trolaan Style

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~Beautiful Springtime~ (Trolaan) Beautiful first spring day Bountiful sun then may rain Be happy spring comes after winter gray Bright sunshine glows like golden grain Enticing spring is here again at last Enchanting sights of so much beauty and renewal Every ray of sun illuminates everything so fast Entire sky is now so blue like a precious jewel Now new and wonderful changes after winter and snow Nurturing beauty of spring is such a sight Nosegays and roses buds see them all grow Nice time to relax and enjoy the spring night On and on my Master has created spring for us all Orchids,roses,tulips and so many beautiful things to enjoy Ocean and mountains during spring season stand tall Outside there's a wonderful weather for all girls and boys. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 April.17.2016 ~Authors Notes: The "Trolaan" is a poetry style created by Valerie Peterson Brown.

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Gary Bateman

Date: 4/18/2016 5:04:00 AM

Hello Dear "D" -- I've read with delight another one of your lovely and uplifting poems here. (This Trolaan Style is quite interesting.) The verses, diction, and tenor of your write are all eloquent my dear!! A Big "7" + A Big FAV in my book!! Cheers and Best, "G" (P.S. I just posted a Rhymed Couplet earlier today, entitled: "Our Human Nature." You might find it of interest.) Continued Best Wishes from Ingrid too!! "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/25/2016 5:43:00 PM

Hi there again G!:)Thank you ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by again n' commenting so beautifully on my poem here.I'm so glad that you like my "Beautiful Springtime " Trolaan style poem.Maybe you should try this poetic style sometimes in the near future:)I deeply appreciate you in all and all your very kind visits, and of course the very awesome comments, the 7/ fav's, and all that you always leave me behind when you visit me.You're always very kind to me,G!Thanks so much again for your support and all:)I'm and I've been very extremely busy myself for months and I am up to this day.Always so much to do everyday in my life, G.My head spins!Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always!Take very good care of each other forever,okay,G.Spill ink!Best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.