Beautiful Solitude

From mountain's view, I stare
a serenade to a snowflake
the beauty that appears

Brushed rose, drapes a cheek
set back eyes wander, in awe 
chills, sensed, height's peaked

Solitude softly dips her hand
whispers, thine dark angel, 
again and again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hollywood-Cutts Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 6:15 PM
yur words painted beautiful images in my head. Since i live in the mountains it clearly describe some of what I see around me.
Hopper Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Very beautiful! Solitude is the best!
Warrior Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 10:09 PM
You do very well in your solitude Timmy...excellent read my friend...god bless and happy holidays...^WW^
Vaso Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 1:20 PM
My kinda poem, great write! and Fav
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 12:54 PM
- Just beautiful, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 12:48 PM
daintily done, tim... we used the same words ' again and again', mine for another contest.. pleasure to read you after a while.. huggs
Smith Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 4:13 PM
Haiku'esk in feeling, beautifully crafted Tim...
La France Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 3:55 PM
Tim, I love the dreamy quality of your write, very nice !
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Hello Tim , yes that is beautiful solitude.Have a nice day my friend.
Cozart Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 11:29 AM
"a serenade to a snowflake" is gorgeous. In fact the entire poem is! Fave.
Sands Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Wow , this is very nice Tim. Beautifully written and expressed! :)
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 10:43 AM
beautiful solitude and a stunning poem Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 10:30 AM
A beautiful pen Tim :)
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