Robert Lindley Poet Cinquain

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( Beautiful Scenes, Night Their True Love Was Born )

 

Robert J. Lindley, 10-02-2020

Cinquain, Sonnet, Cinquain

(CSC)... two of three

 

Syllables per line:

2 4 6 8 2 

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0 2 4 6 8 2

Total number of syllables:184

Total number of words:138

Beautiful Scenes, Night Their True Love Was Born, Two of Three

Beautiful Scenes, Night Their True Love Was Born,
two of three 

Sublime ...
    Love's sweetest bliss,
Whispers tender and sweet
Moanings, pleasures, ecstasy's touch
Sublime.

Moon had its most bountiful gold-glows cast
filtering through tall oak trees onto earth
they in love that truly forever lasts
cared not for fame nor for world's greedy worth.

Romance demands they stay together here
allowing life and joy to penetrate
with the power of joined strength face their fears
and embrace the beauty of Loving fate.

He saw into her gleaming bright blue eyes
moonbeams of ardor's deep radiant glow
she saw in his face, love that never dies
as each yielded to love's tidal tow.

As night's moon and love's hands joined, so did they.
Into loving arms until break of day.

Passion ...
    Love and kisses
Feelings heart wants and needs
Vows, he for her and she for he
Passion.

Robert J. Lindley, 10-06-2020
Cinquain, Sonnet, Cinquain
(CSC)... two of three

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Elaine George October 12, 2020 at 9:22 AM Astoundingly beautiful, dear Robert. ~ Elaine Robert Lindley October 13, 2020 at 6:07 PM Thank you my friend. God bless...

Jan Allison October 10, 2020 at 4:30 PM Belated congrats on POTD Robert, your talent shines so strong my friend:-) hugs jan xx Robert Lindley October 11, 2020 at 7:36 AM Thank you my friend. This poem has a very sprcal meaning to me.. God bless...

Arturo Michael October 10, 2020 at 8:54 AM Nice to see you here again...Congratulations Robert on POTD...wonderful as usual... Robert Lindley October 10, 2020 at 9:15 AM Thank you my friend. It was indeed a great gift given and one that I do so very truly appreciate.. God bless...

Regina Mcintosh October 10, 2020 at 5:04 AM Congrats on POTD :) Bless you with many more inspirations from you pen Robert Lindley October 10, 2020 at 5:51 AM Thank you my friend. Always an honor to receive a POTD notice.. Especially so when the poem selected has such a personal real life meaning. God bless.

Susan Ashley October 9, 2020 at 8:28 AM My dear friend, it is my immense pleasure to congratulate you for your very worthy and well-deserved honor of POTD for this exceptional, sensual and exquisite masterwork of imagery and emotion. I enjoyed this lovely, expressive poetic format, Robert. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:22 PM Thank you my friend. That is enough for me that you liked this format and the new and creative pieces that it has birthed. I did endeavor to put my all into it and was hoping it would resonate well with those that read it. My problem is not having enough time to compose as I once did before my wife's illness. We are very blessed that her first chemo treatment went as well as it did. her next chemo is this coming Tuesday. God bless..

Mark Koplin October 9, 2020 at 5:20 AM A very well written piece my friend. Your words flowed nicely, congrats on POTD!! Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:18 PM Mark, thank you my friend. Iam delighted you found this poem to be so. God bless...

Vijay Pandit October 9, 2020 at 4:57 AM Belated congrats Robert--so well written! Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:17 PM Thank you my friend. I am so very pleased to find your congratulations on this piece. God bless..

Tania Kitchin October 9, 2020 at 4:07 AM A belated congratulations on POTD Robert, a beautiful poem! Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:16 PM Thank you my friend. I am indeed truly shocked to find this was chosen as POTD. A surprise and a much appreciated gift given .. God bless...

Brandy Nicole October 8, 2020 at 4:57 PM "She saw in his face, love that never dies" Of course, as he saw the same in her eyes. This is so beautiful and romantic, soft, tender and passionate- all at the same time. You have created a Masterpiece my dear friend. My best to you and your family. Congratulations Robert, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:14 PM Thank you my friend. Your words are a gift and your friendship a treasure.. God bless..

Gershon Wolf October 8, 2020 at 1:44 PM Congrats on your passionate poem receiving POTD honors, Robert. Here's to your health! Life and Hope, Gershon Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:14 PM Thank you my friend. Life and hope are my wishes for my wife , my children and our family. God bless...

Jeanne Mcgee October 8, 2020 at 1:20 PM Beautiful expressions Robert. Congrats on your POTD. Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:12 PM Thank you my friend. Your comment is a very much appreciated gift. God bless..

Sam Kauffman October 8, 2020 at 9:16 AM A beautiful poem about the commitment of two people to a loving, and intimate, relationship. Congratulations on your POTD Robert! Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:11 PM Thank you my friend. I was lucky to find the time today to check and reply to these many comments and congratulations. God bless.

Sunlite Wanter October 8, 2020 at 8:37 AM I can see you lying back, closed eyes, in your puffy recliner! Such pretty pictures of your love. Congratulations! Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:10 PM Thank you my friend. This trilogy has been a healing balm of sorts. I think it is exceeding my expectations.. God bless...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 8, 2020 at 8:24 AM Beautiful piece Robert, lovely done. Congratulations on POTD! xomo Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:08 PM Thank you my friend. So many things to do eah day. My writing sufferers but my poetic soul continues onward. God bless..

Paula Goldsmith October 8, 2020 at 8:14 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful story/write. Can't wait to read more. Have a blessed day................ Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:07 PM Thank you my friend. The final poem on these three is almost completed. God bless..

Beryl Edmonds October 8, 2020 at 5:25 AM Beautiful, passionate, simply lovely Robert. Congratulations on POTD, Belle Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:06 PM Thank you my friend. God bless...

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2020 at 5:20 AM - A beautiful poem, Robert :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:02 PM Thank ou my friend. This is a very pleasnt surprise. God bless..

Tom Cunningham October 8, 2020 at 12:45 AM From Poe like verse to romance, your talents shine through Robert. Congratulations on the well deserved honour of POTD. Tom Robert Lindley October 9, 2020 at 2:01 PM Thank you my friend. I am truly surprosed at this sudden recognition of this poem.

Susan Ashley October 7, 2020 at 4:41 PM My dear friend, your poetic presentation is a feast of ardent and sensual imagery. You set a passionate scene for a deep and beautiful love, Robert. Your romantic pen never fails you, dear poet. A brilliant piece! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Susan Ashley October 7, 2020 at 5:57 PM I always prefer quality over quantity, my dear friend.. and your graceful pen will forever spill gold :) Don’t let the lack of comments get you down. I have noticed that it’s been slow these last couple days.. Robert Lindley October 7, 2020 at 5:22 PM Thank you my friend. With over forty views and now two comments , I think that perhaps this form and my writings are not too many readers tastes. I do so deeply appreciate both wonderful comments and my true friends... I feel that my pen no longer measures up. God bless..

Gregory Richard Barden October 7, 2020 at 1:41 PM True love, passion, romance, dreamy imagery, a touch of shadowy intrigue, and the moon - all my favorite elements, woven into a charming and beautiful Rhyme - just love this, Sir Roberto, and am adding to my favorites! Nicely done, my friend - keep up the great work! :o) Robert Lindley October 7, 2020 at 5:18 PM Thank you my friend. I will finish the third part soon and post it. Then perhaps stop writing the (CSC).... As I am attempting to finish my many poem fragments accumulated over these last few decades. Time always seems to be too short and life seems to fight me in every way..