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Beautiful Scars

These scars on my soul are beautiful and painful, deep gashes that cannot be seen except in my eyes; the sorrow I keep within me is dreadful, my short life has been full of death and whys. Deep gashes that cannot be seen except in my eyes, I thought the passage of time would heal the scars; my short life has been full of death and whys, at night all my beloved are the sparkling stars. I thought the passage of time would heal the scars, I take two white roses to the tomb of my babies; at night my beloved are the sparkling stars, my forever grief is full of long past sweet reveries. I take two white roses to the tomb of my babies, weeping I touch all the names engraved in stone; my forever grief is full of long past reveries, within my soul the forever sorrow still moans. Weeping I touch all the names engraved in stone, yet from this pain something beautiful was to be; within my soul the forever sorrows still moan, and I write from a scarred soul my sad poetry. Yet from this pain something beautiful was to be, the sorrow I keep within me is dreadful; and I write from a scarred soul my poetry, these scars on my soul are beautiful and painful. _________________________ December 12, 2015 - Reprint Poetry/Pantoum/Beautiful Scars Copyright Protected, ID 12-1378-317-12 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Submitted into the Premier contest Your Personal Favorite sponsor, L MILTON HANKINS, Judged 08/04/2021 Third Place

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Date: 8/5/2021 9:25:00 PM
So poignant! My heart hurt for you as I read this poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/6/2021 6:37:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for your comment, appreciate ~ friendship and serenity ~ Constance
Date: 8/5/2021 9:06:00 AM
So happy to have come across this gem! Oozing poignant, painful emotion. Soul stirring.
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Date: 8/5/2021 11:11:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the nice comment, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 2:58:00 PM
I remember reading this beautiful poem of yours Constance, have enjoyed reading it again. Congratulations on a well deserved win in Milton’s contest … Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:24:00 PM
Belle, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, yes it has been around since 2015 and has been in many contests and is in the PS Anthology, and remains my fav ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 2:34:00 PM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a story/write. So Sorry. Love your line "and I write from a scarred soul my poetry," Yes, our souls are scarred from life. Heaven will be better. Have a great/blessed day with your win...............
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:25:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, yes, we all have scars from life ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 11:06:00 AM
so delighted you submitted this as I remember from the title i have read and commented on this before, Many congrats on your win Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:26:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the comment and congrats, yes this poem has been around since 2015 and has been in many contests and the PS Anthology and remains my fav ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 10:48:00 AM
Dear Constance, congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest with this stunning poem. Your gifted poignant pen embraces the beauty in sadness like no one else can. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:27:00 PM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment and comment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 10:43:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your win as you wrap us in your grief - "beautiful and painful."
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:28:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations and comment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 10:19:00 AM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:29:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 9:02:00 AM
Constance, I am so pleased that this poem, which is a favorite of yours, became a favorite of mine and ranked high in my recent contest. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:30:00 PM
Milt, thanks for the contest and for my fine placement and for the nice comment and congratulations, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 8/2/2021 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful, Constance, your poems are almost all sad , but always well written. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 8/3/2021 7:06:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the compliment, yes I write sad, it seems to have become my forte ~ love and serenity _Constance

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