Beautiful Sadness

"Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought"
 - P.B. Shelley


In the backdrop of the painting of my life of despair
the evanescing patina of the drowning sunset I see,
in the lost day’s sinking grace of melancholy I immerse
as joy of twilight time the last gleam of sky enshrines.

When the silver spangles of shrouded moon disappears
sprouting stars shine the brightest in the darkest of nights.
Tear drops sparkle on my eyelash like drying dew at dawn, 
the rustle of dry leaves whispers the music of the sad fall.

The wind of grief blows the shards of my broken heart,
find a solacing niche in recess of your embracing thicket,
its emerald canopy flooded by ecstasy of sunburst sky,
my dismal eyes see beauty of sadness in sunbeam dance.

July 21, 2019
Writing Challenge 2, July 2019-Melancholy
Sponsor : Dear Heart
March 28, 2020
Contest : Strand Choice S, Any Form, Any Theme
Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 7/24/2019 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal...well done for a win.
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Date: 7/24/2019 12:48:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem, there are so many beautifully penned lines - well done !
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Date: 7/22/2019 8:25:00 PM
All the stanzas are perfectly beautiful, the accompanied quote, is just exactly relevant. Shelly would have applauded you, reading this great poem, when nature describes sadness. through ink of a poet.... Surely this will win top
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Date: 7/21/2019 10:28:00 AM
tears drops sparkle on my eyelash like drying dew at dawn...a lovely sentiment. Good luck in the contest with your great poem.
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