Beautiful Sadness

BEAUTIFUL SADNESS
“The melancholy days are come, the saddest of the year, Of wailing winds, and naked woods and meadows brown and sear.”
William C. Bryant Does she hear the tinkling bell in her sweltering state? No breath seems to touch her face nor move her hair out of place. The wan dove seems beautiful ~ he says, “she’s mine,” in disbelief. He says this on a loop but she never embraces his hook. She clings to dust and nothing more. The x-ray mirror probes her bony exterior, where her lips neither pout nor grin, barely touch in chagrin. He sees they’re slightly pink and his heart pounds in his chest. This melancholic queen’s all his. In wintermoon she moans, though she walks amidst the lilies of Spring. The leaves fall all around her, though they cling to majestic oaks. Pine needles fall from her fingers - though for her love, he sees Christmas trees rainbow bright, sashaying with silver and golden garland, “mine,” like a starling he chirps and the bluebird of happiness galls her though she’ll never let him go.
melancholy deep dark and beautiful - naked void with shutter-eyes custodian sculpts goddess so lofty he can’t reach her
7/19/2019 Writing Challenge 2, July 2019- Melancholy- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 7/24/2019 3:02:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautiful write - well done !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! <3 Kim
Date: 7/24/2019 1:53:00 PM
Many congrats on your top placement. xoxo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne!
Date: 7/20/2019 7:16:00 PM
poignantly beautiful Kim...love your use of words to convey this story....:) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2019 8:20:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 7/20/2019 5:34:00 AM
deep and emotive storytelling... this has great descriptive writing...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2019 6:41:00 AM
Thank you, dear Silent!
Date: 7/19/2019 2:47:00 PM
Wow this is impressive Kim! This is one of the most beautiful halibun I have ever read! It is going directly into my faves! I am sure to see this at the top of the winners list. xxoo : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2019 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie! :)
Date: 7/19/2019 12:18:00 PM
Lovely writing Kim...especially love In wintermoon she moans though she walks amidst the lilies of Spring. GL in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2019 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, dear Jeanne!
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