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Jubilant shoppers scamper down the street looking for super sales on Christmas Eve. And holiday smiles greet all friends they meet feigning they’re in a hurry to leave. It was snowing to everyone's delight and the people were friendly and cheerful. Then I saw something that didn't look right and my mood changed from jolly to tearful. A beggar and his dog shared a bedroll snuggling up close, attempting to stay warm. And it was plain; cold had taken its toll yet together, they'll survive this storm. I've never seen such beautiful sadness true love, amid this indulgent madness. (Sonnet) Dec. 31, 2018 Beautiful sadness Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 1/16/2019 11:16:00 PM
Really nice but sad. I am touched.Best Wishes.
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Date: 1/17/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/15/2019 12:29:00 PM
Very touching story Emile, loved it, sorry never made the final cut in my contest, but it was close!
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Date: 1/15/2019 2:20:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/9/2019 3:42:00 PM
Again your compassion shines through in flying colors. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 1/9/2019 3:59:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/1/2019 10:59:00 AM
true love, amid this indulgent madness-- the sharp contrast you paint highlights the tenderness of the scene. Very nicely done :) Many New Year blessings to you my friend!
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Date: 1/1/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thanks P.S., I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/1/2019 12:32:00 AM
That is truly beautiful sadness, Emile. Well done; you are the Sonnet-maestro. so this was no surprise at all my friend.
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Date: 1/1/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Caren, may your New year be very happy, one of many more to come my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2018 3:38:00 PM
Now that would touch your heart, good work Emile...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/31/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2018 1:47:00 PM
Wow , this really reaches the heart. Very touching poem! So well done Emile! Good luck in the contest and Happy New Year :)
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Date: 12/31/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2018 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful emotion and picture for us of caring. Thanks for my win in your contest, Emile. I got inspired by Eve's Crater Lake contest to finally come up with a winter wonderland for you!
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Date: 12/31/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your support, your poem was beautifully written my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs