Richard Lamoureux Poet Free verse

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NarcasistNarcasist

Beautiful Narcissist

I received a visit
from a beautiful narcissist
She could not see
For she was blinded
By the perceived 
The magnificence she thought I would see
The person she wanted to be
In those few moments
Standing there with effervescent smile
She imagined what must be going through my mind
How I was so fortunate to breath rarified air
How her being here was my most special gift

I knew she would only stay for a while
When she visits she leaves a gift
From honeyed tongue and perfumed lips
I listen to practiced recycled praise
Saying the same thin words in different ways
The sound of her voice hollow, yet still it stays
I am left here wondering why?
perhaps it's because she's candy for my eyes
I accept imagined beauty as my prize

Once gone, I forget she was even here
Someone who ventured close but didn't come near
She is but a whisper on the wind
Her fabric lacks substance it's badly thinned 
So I move on to life that matters
Away from pretenders clinging to ladders

In a few minutes she will come your way
A couple more rungs to fill her day
Bask for a moment in that smile
Try not to blink 
She'll stay just a short while
Perhaps you too will wonder why
Or maybe you'll walk away without a goodbye
Not interested
In seeing
Or being 
Near
Close to
A beautiful narcissist

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Regina Mcintosh September 7, 2014 at 10:25 PM Wow. I think you did a wonderful job of describing this type of person. So sad but extraordinary poem. Thank you for your words, Love and prayers, Gina Richard Lamoureux September 8, 2014 at 8:32 AM I appreciate your prayers and kind visit, thanks Regina.

Connie Marcum Wong April 14, 2014 at 8:16 PM These people take you on a journey which becomes a harsh learning experience sometimes, but a valuable lesson none the less. I enjoyed your poem Richard. Aloha Richard Lamoureux April 14, 2014 at 9:52 PM Aloha back to you Connie. Thanks for the visit.

Eileen Manassian April 14, 2014 at 8:14 PM Hmmmmmm...this is such an intriguing write. One has to wonder about the inspiration behind it. Wow. I'm left a little lost for words. Must come back to it later. Richard Lamoureux April 14, 2014 at 9:51 PM You just never know when inspiration will visit. Let me know your thoughts when you come back to it. Is your daughter still visiting? I'm curious to here her thoughts about my book. I haven't had a younger person read it yet.

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2014 at 6:43 PM you have penned many interesting lines here, Richard. I enjoyed the imagery you showed us. I enjoy my close friends who give their all to our relationships. These are the people of substance. Those we can feel close to and truly admire. Narcissists are so shallow that you cannot trust a word they say. WEll portrayed! Richard Lamoureux April 14, 2014 at 7:01 PM Thanks Andrea. I have been fortunate to make many new friends through this site. Comments from friends like you have made this a meaningful experience.

Toquyen Harrell April 14, 2014 at 12:51 PM Yes, one has to see the beauty within. Love it, Rick! You did a great job :) Richard Lamoureux April 14, 2014 at 12:55 PM Thanks Toquyen.

Monterey Sirak April 14, 2014 at 7:47 AM A narcissist must be incredibly lonely and sad. Who ever gets beyond the perfect looks and practiced speech to find the woman underneath? If her memory is easily carried away on the wind, is there ever anyone to hold her through dark nights when the demons come close? (I know that wasn't the point, but it is what I saw) Richard Lamoureux April 14, 2014 at 8:17 AM I have loved a narcissist (not romantic love, it was love for my father) it is a rather lonely task. He was the demon who haunted many dark days and nights. You are right he was incredibly lonely and sad. My heart still weeps for him. He passed away with no one there to weep for him.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 14, 2014 at 7:09 AM Narcissists of the world be aware for good men have seen the truth thus turn their backs to you! Wonderful message blended with the right dose of wisdom and experience! Well done my friend Richard! Richard Lamoureux April 14, 2014 at 8:20 AM Thanks Demetrios. You are kind.

Arthur Vaso April 13, 2014 at 9:46 PM Thank god I am not a Narcissist !!! ops be right back, someone moved my mirror!!! Lovely poem. I would think or hope, most poets see the inside before the outside! That's what makes us poets! From your writings I know for sure this is true of you! Richard Lamoureux April 14, 2014 at 12:39 AM I think you must be one of the funniest people on the soup. You make me laugh my friend. Also thanks for the kind comment.

Shadow Hamilton April 13, 2014 at 4:58 PM interesting poem Rick good pen hugs Richard Lamoureux April 13, 2014 at 6:12 PM Thanks Shadow. I hope you are having a sunny day like we are having here.

Ken Carroll April 13, 2014 at 12:17 PM Good stuff Richard about your beautiful narcissist! Richard Lamoureux April 13, 2014 at 12:36 PM Thanks Ken, thanks for the subtle spelling correction *lol* I appreciate it.