Beautiful Mountain Lake

Climbing down the mountain face
to reach the sparkling lake.
Just below the rocky base
the sky seems so opaque.

Round the bend the waters roll;
I dip my tired feet.
Can feel the freedom in my soul,
a sense of peace so sweet.

Rippling and twirling by
a surge of heavenly blue.
I touch the surface with a sigh,
see my reflection too.

Trudging along the rocky shore
the water seems to follow.
It cascades to my own front door
that sits within the hollow.

Love to watch and drown my sorrows,
every day renewed.
May this place hold my tomorrows
peacefulness subdued.





By Deb Wilson
written September22nd 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Deb. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 1:00 AM
Really enjoyed your poem, It is beautiful. Congratulations on your win, well done. Lee
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October 1, 2011 at 12:43 AM
Enjoyed reading this. Congratulations Deb
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September 30, 2011 at 11:49 PM
Congrats on your 7th place win, Deb! Kim
Johnson Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:32 PM
Very nice Deb. Could have come in at no. 1. This must have been a hard contest to judge. lCongratulations. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:56 PM
congrats on your 7th place win Deb, beautifully done
Brown Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Deb. Love, Carol
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