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Beautiful Liar

You lead me on seeing my life was incomplete whispering those promises dripping honey sweet... Now I am to understand we are to be just friends alone in my house of sand contemplating inevitable end... Such a comfortable liar weaver of broken dreams fantasier magical bean buyer a dark siren mystifier... Falling I must confess I won't buy them anymore demigoddess in little black dress bedroom white liar galore... I lived your beautiful lie being the hoper and the prayer looking for rainbow in our sky and you the proclaimed soothsayer... But I became ensnared in my self created fire by such a beautiful liar victim of my own desire.. ~ ~ ~ ~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2014 7:39:00 PM

Ken, this is so beautiful.... I once meet a guy, who fits this description, played with my heart and friendship. The moment I saw something was wrong with him, I had to stay away from him. Glad I did, cause he was fake as fake can be. He revealed his true colors, the next day. Sadly, he thought he had a chance with me... A great poem.... Love it so much.... Linda

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/27/2014 8:08:00 PM

I agree with you, i decided to stay away. But, like a dummy I forgive all the time..LOL

Ken Carroll
Date: 5/27/2014 7:59:00 PM

Thank you Linda..We do have to be careful with those who toy with our feelings..

Tamara Robinson

Date: 4/17/2014 10:20:00 PM

Nice.....

Ken Carroll
Date: 4/17/2014 10:25:00 PM

Thank you Tamara!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 2/2/2014 3:10:00 PM

Wow. Love the poem from the title all the way through. Great use of word combinations that kept me captivated. Awesome :)

Ken Carroll
Date: 2/2/2014 3:12:00 PM

Thank you Karen!

Skat A

Date: 1/30/2014 8:25:00 PM

interesting, how one falls without asking permission ...good one..SKAT

Ken Carroll
Date: 1/30/2014 8:38:00 PM

Thank you Skat..Hope all is well with Linda and you.. Ken

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/30/2014 1:36:00 AM

Oh....A beautiful piece of realization and truth. Hmmmmm.....You hold the key to the answers, my friend. Isn't it amazing that even out of our pain, beauty is born...as in this piece of yours. keep writing....The heart will mend.

Ken Carroll
Date: 1/30/2014 2:16:00 AM

Thank you Eileen for stopping by..