Written, March 25, 2025 For The Contest, “Write Eight Beautiful Lines” Sponsor, Constance La France
1st Place
“Beyond her limits, searching out new sand- exuberant with life, she takes her stand.” _by Poet The ocean breathes with rise and fall of waves, and with a passion, hunts the peaceful shore to endlessly roll out her swell that craves to crash the rocks, withdraw, and thrash once more. Though calmer wind and current often paves her tranquil scenes that turn around the score; akin to peaceful flows of placid streams- her ripples glow on mirrored moonlit beams.
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