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Beautiful Fall Declares God's Magnificence

Blessed season of Fall bursts with beauty
Exposing color-changes’ divergence
Accentuating air of serenity
Upheld by God’s glorious* magnificence!
Testifying nature’s great variety
Inspiring creativity’s influence
Fall’s radiance shines midst gloom’s obscurity
Upstaging Summer heat’s oppressive sense
Leading toward triumph’s progress-bounty!

Fiery glow over boredom’s prevalence
Autumn shows grand life stage reality
Lifting our spirits from failures’ despondence
Letting us learn truths on humility!

*Psalm 145:5 I will speak of the glorious honour of thy (LORD's) majesty, and of thy wondrous works.

September 10, 2018 
4th Place, "Beautiful fall" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton; judged on 9/14/2018.

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Line Gauthier Date: 9/16/2018 2:07:00 PM Well done, Beata. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply Beata Agustin Date: 9/16/2018 9:57:00 PM Praise God. Thanks for the comment. Actually, I'm thrilled and delighted with the challenge of writing about Fall, considering that I haven't personally experienced such season in our country. Thanks again. God bless you.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/14/2018 10:31:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful acrostic Beata! : ) Login to Reply Beata Agustin Date: 9/15/2018 6:38:00 AM Praise God. Thanks for the comment. Actually, I'm thrilled and delighted with the challenge of writing about Fall, considering that I haven't personally experienced such season in our country. Thanks again. God bless you.

John Hamilton Date: 9/14/2018 2:16:00 PM Very nice Beata, next time please do not center the poem, it detracts from the acrostic in readability. Login to Reply Beata Agustin Date: 9/15/2018 6:40:00 AM Thanks, and yes, I'll "re-post" it bearing in mind your comment. God bless you. Beata Agustin Date: 9/15/2018 6:37:00 AM Praise God. Thanks for the placement, and for the comments. Likewise, thanks for the privilege to be a part of your sponsored contest. Actually, I'm thrilled and delighted with the challenge of writing about Fall, considering that we I haven't personally experienced such season in our country. Thanks again. God bless you.