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Beautiful Essence

A softness in me you've awakened One I thought had been long gone Hidden from what others had taken To await a future promising dawn Found it hidden beneath old scars Needing carings own quintessence One who'd move the heavenly stars To share his own beautiful essence 3rd place Date Written: 9/9/2019 Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Line Form Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2019 11:43:00 AM

Brenda congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent Rhyme poem. It is beautifully penned.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/16/2019 11:52:00 AM

Thank you so very much!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2019 1:05:00 PM

- This is lovely Brenda, congratulations on your winning :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 2:04:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise! You are too kind!;)

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/11/2019 7:31:00 AM

Lovely, Brenda ... Congratulations ...

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/11/2019 11:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Probir!;)

Gary Smith

Date: 9/10/2019 12:30:00 PM

A lovely poem Brenda, congrats. :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/10/2019 9:44:00 PM

Thank you for the visit!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/9/2019 1:03:00 PM

This one is such a beautifully romantic write. Gorgeous Poem Brenda :) hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Sandy your too kind!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2019 8:47:00 AM

I think all people hope for this most salient of human experiences. You have captured it here. An excellent way to use your eight words.good luck in the contest.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Rick! Always appreciate your visits!;)

John Fleming

Date: 9/8/2019 1:07:00 AM

This is a lovely little tribute you have created here, Brenda...I very much enjoyed this one. Lots of affection. :) john P.s I think you intended "scars"...not "scares". :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/8/2019 1:31:00 AM

Thank you John and of course you was right! Damn autocorrect anyway!;) all my affection!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/7/2019 10:20:00 PM

Yet another beauty you've penned here, Brenda! :) gw (soup mail, please)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/10/2019 11:45:00 AM

And now, congrats to you on your trophy winner in the contest, Brenda. Best always, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/7/2019 10:27:00 PM

Ah Gershon thank you my friend!;)