Beautiful Downfall

Death
is the only getaway from pain and sufferings
However.. it is beautiful in some kind of way
Black shiny coffin,
Melody of mourning souls , 
Endless prayers and flowers...

Every living souls
will someday get their wretched soul
ripped out by the raging ripper

Dying 
The moment where naked eyes
see the unseen
Head full of vapours
Body turns numb
Ode on a nightingale ..
ceases the mourns and cries
Whispers of the black gentlemen
slightly halt the tune of prayers..

Some died
of suffocation ,
mortification, suicide , diseases
Countless way 
of death one could ever think
Date and time remain
as a secret

However, 
Heaven and Hell
are the only final destination
for the spirits to go to
The goods
will remain forever 
with the roaming angels

While the wretched, 
will forever burnt with the devils
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 29, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Hi Ashraf, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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November 30, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Wow thats one heartwarming response ive ever haddd thanks dude!!
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November 29, 2015 at 10:06 PM
Ashraf, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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November 30, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Thanks Linda! Looking forward to read your poemsss.
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November 28, 2015 at 1:59 PM
Ashraf, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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November 30, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Hi SKAT. I am still learning and yet not so good with poems and I am looking forward to read your poems and exchange ideas with you. Thanks I appreciate it!
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