Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Beautiful Doll

You are such 
a beautiful doll
all I can do is
hold your 
beautiful face

On my finger tips
in between 
my hands
You have eyes
to die for
that is if 
I haven't 
died already

Standing with you 
in Heaven
your skin
beautiful and fresh
colours your eyes

Hair cascading down
great Niagra falls 
on your beauty
holding such a dream
a paradise 
in heaven awakens 

Your parting lips 
blushing colour 
of a rose
moist like 
the morning dew
one kiss 
addicted

My eyes stolen
can only 
see you
a fountain 
containing 
so much beauty
that fountain
 flows down
around you

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Charmaine Chircop September 7, 2013 at 2:15 PM toss a coin in the doll's fountain and your wish will come true : ) Its lovely when a man is able to see the beauty of a woman...This definitely describes a lovely lady through your eyes.. I hope she s beautiful inside as on the outside. uniquely beautiful Liam Mcdaid September 8, 2013 at 2:30 AM ON SECOND THOUGHTS I WILL LEAVE IT FOR A WHILE TAKING YOUR ADVICE I PUT WINGS IN ONE THAT I WROTE FOR SOMEONE LAST NIGHT HA HA HOPE YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY Charmaine Chircop September 7, 2013 at 3:17 PM Blush..I dont deserve such verses but tnks..Im speechless..Oki We ll read Ugly doll tomorrow..but just remember sonetimes people dnt want to change and bexome strangers but it just happens.Its sad when it does..but still so much beauty to live for. Liam Mcdaid September 7, 2013 at 2:56 PM oh i will post ugly doll i wrote it ha ha when she put me through hell i sat and watched her change tomorrow i will post it ,i posted this one for you inside and out you shine beautiful

Seosamh De Burca September 7, 2013 at 6:39 AM Nicely written, your poems has a natural fluidity that adds greatly to the poem. Well done. Liam Mcdaid September 7, 2013 at 1:10 PM THANK YOU SO MUCH DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Kim Van Breda September 7, 2013 at 5:56 AM Great admiration penned in this one liam-- your 'beautiful doll' must be beautiful indeed. Enjoyed this xx Liam Mcdaid September 7, 2013 at 6:25 AM SHE IS ONE OF DREAMS I HAVE NOT MEET HER YET THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2013 at 11:37 PM a beautiful poem for what must be an amazingly beautiful woman!! Charmaine Chircop September 7, 2013 at 2:12 PM Hey ..this is my friend i was telling you about what great poems she has.Our cup of tea : ) Liam Mcdaid September 7, 2013 at 5:34 AM STILL HAVE NOT FOUND HER YET BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Kelly Deschler September 6, 2013 at 7:41 PM Wow! Beauty does not get much more perfect than a doll...sounds like you have one in mind....Barbie?...Just kidding!...Hope you do have her near you...A perfectly written poem, Liam! Nicely done!....Please, read my poem "Serenity", sometime. Liam Mcdaid September 7, 2013 at 5:30 AM THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THIS IS THE RESULT OF THE DOLL IN HELL