Beautiful Doll

You are such 
a beautiful doll
all I can do is
hold your 
beautiful face

On my finger tips
in between 
my hands
You have eyes
to die for
that is if 
I haven't 
died already

Standing with you 
in Heaven
your skin
beautiful and fresh
colours your eyes

Hair cascading down
great Niagra falls 
on your beauty
holding such a dream
a paradise 
in heaven awakens 

Your parting lips 
blushing colour 
of a rose
moist like 
the morning dew
one kiss 
addicted

My eyes stolen
can only 
see you
a fountain 
containing 
so much beauty
that fountain
 flows down
around you

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/7/2013 2:15:00 PM
toss a coin in the doll's fountain and your wish will come true : ) Its lovely when a man is able to see the beauty of a woman...This definitely describes a lovely lady through your eyes.. I hope she s beautiful inside as on the outside. uniquely beautiful
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 2:30:00 AM
ON SECOND THOUGHTS I WILL LEAVE IT FOR A WHILE TAKING YOUR ADVICE I PUT WINGS IN ONE THAT I WROTE FOR SOMEONE LAST NIGHT HA HA HOPE YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/7/2013 3:17:00 PM
Blush..I dont deserve such verses but tnks..Im speechless..Oki We ll read Ugly doll tomorrow..but just remember sonetimes people dnt want to change and bexome strangers but it just happens.Its sad when it does..but still so much beauty to live for.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 2:56:00 PM
oh i will post ugly doll i wrote it ha ha when she put me through hell i sat and watched her change tomorrow i will post it ,i posted this one for you inside and out you shine beautiful
Date: 9/7/2013 6:39:00 AM
Nicely written, your poems has a natural fluidity that adds greatly to the poem. Well done.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 1:10:00 PM
THANK YOU SO MUCH DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/7/2013 5:56:00 AM
Great admiration penned in this one liam-- your 'beautiful doll' must be beautiful indeed. Enjoyed this xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 6:25:00 AM
SHE IS ONE OF DREAMS I HAVE NOT MEET HER YET THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/6/2013 11:37:00 PM
a beautiful poem for what must be an amazingly beautiful woman!!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/7/2013 2:12:00 PM
Hey ..this is my friend i was telling you about what great poems she has.Our cup of tea : )
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 5:34:00 AM
STILL HAVE NOT FOUND HER YET BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/6/2013 7:41:00 PM
Wow! Beauty does not get much more perfect than a doll...sounds like you have one in mind....Barbie?...Just kidding!...Hope you do have her near you...A perfectly written poem, Liam! Nicely done!....Please, read my poem "Serenity", sometime.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 5:30:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THIS IS THE RESULT OF THE DOLL IN HELL
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