Beautiful Disaster

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This poem was inspired by Casarah Nance, and thus dedicated to her, a poet with great skill, imagination and creativity! Her writes hit the reader on many many levels and make people taste the lives of those they otherwise would never meet, thank you Dear Casarah!

Dedicated to Casarah Nance

 

 

 

Beautiful Disaster

There she is
Silhouette in the night
Lights glimmer, as fame simmers
She is all of my desires
She is all of my fires

Here I am wet
Flooded with pain
There she is dry
As a desert rain
Her beauty rouge bleeding into my soul

I wash my hands
I wash my meaningless life
Of sins and woes
Alcohol in the sails
As I fade to seas far away

She at my feet
Singing her lovers lullaby
Me in the wind
Of sadness’s despair
The air soon to confess a sin

All my life, no lover in the morning bed
No future for a chance to wed
There she is now so devoted
Yet here we both are so bloated
Throats cut and floating

On a rivers dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/10/2017 9:46:00 PM
Very beautiful :)
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:09:00 AM
I am indeed so grateful
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/20/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Funom!
Date: 2/7/2016 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful dedication. Thank you for sharing.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Tonyna!
Date: 2/1/2016 6:03:00 PM
Dear Arthur Yes I'm well just friend, thank you for asking not to worry I'm tough they tell me, loved your comment it made me feel better will be posting more of this type in the next couple of days, working on my book off line but I have to fill a few chapters with just a few more of this type, take care my dear poetic friend, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 9:07:00 PM
Thanks Cherl, haven't been here as much, but I will go see your page soon!
Date: 2/1/2016 6:00:00 PM
Dear Arthur To the skilled bard who has fallen in love with the words and vision of a faded rose always captured in a timeless repose, love's enchantment is a spell binding thing, when I read Poe's poem Anibel Lee I feel the same thing as you my friend, it takes my breathe away and I'm lost under this masters spell, love this and give you a seven just wonderful work here my friend, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 9:06:00 PM
You are so kind, Cherl, thank you!
Date: 1/29/2016 5:54:00 PM
It got morbid but sounded very cool and poetic nonetheless. Casarah writes amazing poetry, as do you. So this was meant to be!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 9:03:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, :)
Date: 1/29/2016 8:50:00 AM
Casarah is indeed amazing as are you my friend. This is rather disturbing but extremely well done.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, I would be disturbed if it it was not disturbing! :)
Date: 1/29/2016 2:55:00 AM
Wow, your ending caught me by surprise Authur. Outstanding write! #7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Connie, hope you and your husband are doing well!
Date: 1/28/2016 11:28:00 PM
POWERFUL WRITE!!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Elaine!
Date: 1/28/2016 2:47:00 PM
Casarah is an outstanding talent and this is a lovely dedication to her creativity - would love to see a gothic collaboration by the two of you one day!!!:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 8:58:00 PM
Thank you Jan, may the luck of the Irish be with you tomorrow!
Date: 1/28/2016 1:25:00 PM
These lines just tug at the heart and pull it in so many different directions... An amazing poem and dedication!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Kelly!:)
Date: 1/28/2016 7:01:00 AM
Arthur, this is beautifully but sadly penned, love how you are dedicating your poems, you are a skilled and wonderful writer, a real talent, I am loving this 7 ~
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, I smile when I get nice comments from poets I admire!
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