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Inspired by the picture.

Framed by the doorway Such a vivacious curvey temptress So evocative and provocative A fem fetal a tasty feast for the eyes sex kitten Like Diana, the Huntress stalking her prey Perfectly formed poised and irresistible As forbidden fruit ripe for picking So juicy and tantalizing A paragon of such sumptuous beauty As fragrant as a rose and as potent Oozing feminity turning up the heat A Siren so alluring as a moth so transfixed Dances hypnotized against their will Toward a leaful candle aglow flickering flame With lusty eyes were full of naughty unashamed Lust and the fire of desire Beckoning come hither As a cunning spider set its trap To snare a passing fly And entangle the victim Into her Web of deceit and fabricated lies Her sumptuous lips laced with poison An elixir of certain death Bella Donna was her name A cruel judge who sentences her victims To a certain death Leaving a trail of tears and broken hearts Of lover's family and mothers unaware of their demise Many foolish besotted victims lost the game Now left shrivelled up And sucked dry Litter her honey trap none ever survived If you see Bella Donna in that doorway Don't look into her eyes Turn away and walk away On the other side.

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Date: 3/16/2024 6:11:00 AM
Hey Peter, your poem paints a vivid and evocative portrait of a femme fatale, Bella Donna, whose irresistible allure and dangerous charm captivate those who encounter her. The imagery used to describe her, such as being "framed by the doorway" and possessing a "sumptuous beauty," conveys a sense of her magnetism and seductive power.
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Date: 3/16/2024 8:03:00 AM
Hi, how are you doing? Thanks so much. Inspired by the picture. I could just imagine, she was out for the kill. The hunter out to catch another victim Men falling at her feet. The look in her eyes and how she displays her goods. I've met Women like that, as so many out there. Thanks so much. Always great to hear from you. Enjoy the rest of your weekend. Pete.

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