Beautiful Creature

She was the most beautiful creature
that I had ever set my eyes on,
since when I started to see.

Her hair sparkled as though it was sprinkled
stardust in the screaming sunlight;
voice flowing from her strawberry lips could
entice dolphins to dance in divine synchronisation;
her eyes light up every man's hidden sensuality into a halo.....

Memories of her still keep replaying in my mind,
especially when I slide my fingers on the skin of the ocean;
she had the sweetest texture that I had ever felt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:29 AM
LOL
Kimathi Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 4:03 AM
;-)
A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 11:29 AM
another sweet reply...Linda
Kimathi Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 9:11 AM
^_^
A   Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Teddy, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
Kimathi Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 6:32 AM
Thanks Linda! Teddy here. <3..........<3......................
Lindley Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:06 PM
Congrats on your win!!
Kimathi Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 6:30 AM
Thanks Robert! :-)
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