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Beautiful Creature

She was the most beautiful creature that I had ever set my eyes on, since when I started to see. Her hair sparkled as though it was sprinkled stardust in the screaming sunlight; voice flowing from her strawberry lips could entice dolphins to dance in divine synchronisation; her eyes light up every man's hidden sensuality into a halo..... Memories of her still keep replaying in my mind, especially when I slide my fingers on the skin of the ocean; she had the sweetest texture that I had ever felt.

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Date: 9/3/2014 11:29:00 AM
LOL
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/4/2014 4:03:00 AM
;-)
Date: 9/2/2014 11:29:00 AM
another sweet reply...Linda
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/3/2014 9:11:00 AM
^_^
Date: 8/17/2014 10:33:00 PM
Teddy, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/18/2014 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Linda! Teddy here. <3..........<3......................
Date: 8/17/2014 10:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/18/2014 6:30:00 AM
Thanks Robert! :-)

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