Beautiful Chaos

The Galaxy; This cluster of stars
The sea; This concealed beauty and scars,
The inevitable suffering, the desired alleviation
All these could be seen through her eyes' nation!
She was a beautiful chaos, more beautiful than Mars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Very creative work..I enjoyed reading your expressive work..If only allieviation could happen in many situations on earth..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Tadros Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 8:43 AM
thank you :) Yeah, I really wish too..
Nance Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 5:01 PM
Awesome. I really loved this imagery!
Tadros Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 12:30 AM
Thank you very much :) !
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