Beautiful Chaos

Doesn't she look beautiful? 
With blood cracking on her lips,
While crystals flow as she weeps
Brightly leaving traces on her scrawny cheeks, 
Eyes puffed-- lack of sleep for a week
Isn't she ravishingly adorned? 
With apparent rope marks on her delicate nape, 
Bruises like the purplish color of grape, 
Knife marks-- old and new-- layered on her wrists
Calloused hands, dry and clenched fists. 
Doesn't she look appealing? 
With dried clear saline outlining her face, 
Hair that never speaks of glory nor grace
Bloodshot eyes blankly staring at the ceiling, 
Body laying flat on the coffee-stained flooring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/28/2019 10:31:00 AM
A very dramatic pen with clear imagery! Panagiota
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/30/2019 1:23:00 PM
Jessica~ many poets here are experiencing pain from illnesses. Some have lost loved ones. Your pain is real, just know others here suffer, too. We all share pain. Emotional or.physical. You can choose happiness, honestly! Panagiota
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Jessica Alvero
Date: 10/29/2019 5:32:00 AM
Somehow this reminds me of myself.
Date: 10/28/2019 9:54:00 AM
Sad so sad, maybe I don't get it...beautiful in a sarcastic way? Feels like a story of abuse and suicide...beautiful?
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/29/2019 3:49:00 PM
I'm so sorry if this is your reality!
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Jessica Alvero
Date: 10/29/2019 5:33:00 AM
It is more beautiful to end it all than to keep on experiencing the same chaos over and over again.
Date: 10/28/2019 9:37:00 AM
Oh wow. Potent visceral imagery. Excellent, powerful piece Jessica. xomo
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Jessica Alvero
Date: 10/29/2019 5:34:00 AM
Thank u.
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