CayCay Godwin Poet Acrostic

BEAUTIFUL BABY BOY

Dedicated to Kyle, My Darling Son


Bouncing boy is baby joy.
Enchanting sky-blue eyes,
Adored so by my heart.
Undoes me when he cries.
Tiny toes and fingers start
Internal loving sighs.  
Fascinated when his lips part,
Uttering endless, "oh my's", 
Loving him, knows no "why's."

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Amanda Teague January 18, 2016 at 5:01 PM I love this CayCay Godwin January 18, 2016 at 6:14 PM Thank you, you would have loved him, too! CayCay

Dan Cwiak January 11, 2016 at 7:36 AM Nice touch for an acrostic. I would not really have thought of something so light, tender, and moving. Congrats, CayCay!

Poet Destroyer A January 6, 2016 at 12:32 AM Hi CayCay, Congratulations on your "Beautiful-Acrostic Win." ~LINDA~

Skat A January 3, 2016 at 11:15 PM CAYCAY, CONGRATS on your win. skat

Lin Lane January 1, 2016 at 7:07 PM CayCay, your little boy is also beautiful. Congratulations. CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 7:25 PM Yes, he is and I must tell you he is now 30, but still my baby and how quickly I can transport myself to those infant/baby/toddler images. I know you know! Thank you, Lin ... CayCay

Balveen Cheema January 1, 2016 at 4:30 PM Congrats CayCay on your great placement! Babies can unwind anyone! CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 5:07 PM Thank you, Balveen - you are most kind to comment. Have a great(!) year, may your creativity flow ... CayCay

Jan Allison January 1, 2016 at 4:20 PM Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 5:06 PM Thank you, my dear one ... CayCay

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores January 1, 2016 at 4:03 PM Beautiful acrostic Caycay. Congratulations on the placement of the contest. CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 5:06 PM You are so sweet to leave this comment. I thank you, Nayda ... CayCay

John Hamilton January 1, 2016 at 3:57 PM Really, really good! Thanks cay cay for this wonderful poem. Congrats on your great placement. CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 5:04 PM Thank you, John, for your kind words and for the time and energy you put into sponsoring contests. I value and appreciate you ... CayCay

Sandra Haight January 1, 2016 at 3:41 PM This is lovely, CayCay. I remember well those days! Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars December 31, 2015 at 6:09 PM aww... this is so sweet CayCay, a7 -*smiles*

Arthur Vaso December 31, 2015 at 1:41 PM I feel so redundant here....... Beautiful! This reminds a story, that I might try and make into a blog! :) CayCay Godwin December 31, 2015 at 5:32 PM Isn't it great, isn't it grand, when we inspire one another! Love the comment you left and all the best on the blog - I'll check because you've made me curious ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich December 31, 2015 at 12:19 PM simply... BEAUTIFUL CayCay Godwin December 31, 2015 at 5:34 PM I love yours - my favorite. Thanks, Sweetie ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux December 31, 2015 at 10:42 AM :0) thanks for considering my suggestion. CayCay Godwin December 31, 2015 at 5:34 PM Back at you - appreciate the hand ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux December 31, 2015 at 10:19 AM I would put a period after heart and then put "Undoes me with his cries" as a separate sentence. You did do it right but I like the two thoughts being separated. I hope this makes sense. Hugs Rick. CayCay Godwin December 31, 2015 at 10:27 AM I does done it as you said. Thank you, Rick ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux December 31, 2015 at 9:46 AM Consider changing undo to undoes. I think the tense fits better. It is indeed beautiful. Happy New Year Cay Cay. CayCay Godwin December 31, 2015 at 9:56 AM "Enchanting sky-blue eyes, undo me when he cries" - the line between is between commas. I wish I could ask you ('hello') to respond now - I think I have it right. Thank you, Richard - I am a thinking 'bout it and I appreciate you ... CayCay

Jan Allison December 31, 2015 at 6:38 AM Made me have a lump in my throat thinking of my own son when he was tiny - delightful write CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison December 31, 2015 at 5:01 PM I always read my comments and the replies:-) love the amendments :-) hugs Jan xx CayCay Godwin December 31, 2015 at 8:48 AM Thank you, Sweetie. Don't know that you'll read this, but I completely revised it - the lines woke me up, they wanted me to change them, I just know it ... CayCay