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Beautiful Baby Boy

To My Son with Love All The World Bouncing boy is baby joy. Enchanting sky-blue eyes, Adored so by my heart. Undoes me when he cries. Tiny toes and fingers start Internal loving sighs. Fascinated when his lips part, Uttering endless, "oh my's", Loving him, knows no "why's." ... CayCay Jennings December 31, 2015

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Amanda Teague

Date: 1/18/2016 5:01:00 PM

I love this

Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/18/2016 6:14:00 PM

Thank you, you would have loved him, too! CayCay

Dan Cwiak

Date: 1/11/2016 7:36:00 AM

Nice touch for an acrostic. I would not really have thought of something so light, tender, and moving. Congrats, CayCay!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2016 12:32:00 AM

Hi CayCay, Congratulations on your "Beautiful-Acrostic Win." ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 1/3/2016 11:15:00 PM

CAYCAY, CONGRATS on your win. skat

Lin Lane

Date: 1/1/2016 7:07:00 PM

CayCay, your little boy is also beautiful. Congratulations.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/1/2016 7:25:00 PM

Yes, he is and I must tell you he is now 30, but still my baby and how quickly I can transport myself to those infant/baby/toddler images. I know you know! Thank you, Lin ... CayCay

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/1/2016 4:30:00 PM

Congrats CayCay on your great placement! Babies can unwind anyone!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/1/2016 5:07:00 PM

Thank you, Balveen - you are most kind to comment. Have a great(!) year, may your creativity flow ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2016 4:20:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/1/2016 5:06:00 PM

Thank you, my dear one ... CayCay

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 1/1/2016 4:03:00 PM

Beautiful acrostic Caycay. Congratulations on the placement of the contest.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/1/2016 5:06:00 PM

You are so sweet to leave this comment. I thank you, Nayda ... CayCay

John Hamilton

Date: 1/1/2016 3:57:00 PM

Really, really good! Thanks cay cay for this wonderful poem. Congrats on your great placement.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/1/2016 5:04:00 PM

Thank you, John, for your kind words and for the time and energy you put into sponsoring contests. I value and appreciate you ... CayCay

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/1/2016 3:41:00 PM

This is lovely, CayCay. I remember well those days! Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 12/31/2015 6:09:00 PM

aww... this is so sweet CayCay, a7 -*smiles*

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/31/2015 1:41:00 PM

I feel so redundant here....... Beautiful! This reminds a story, that I might try and make into a blog! :)

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/31/2015 5:32:00 PM

Isn't it great, isn't it grand, when we inspire one another! Love the comment you left and all the best on the blog - I'll check because you've made me curious ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2015 12:19:00 PM

simply... BEAUTIFUL

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/31/2015 5:34:00 PM

I love yours - my favorite. Thanks, Sweetie ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2015 10:42:00 AM

:0) thanks for considering my suggestion.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/31/2015 5:34:00 PM

Back at you - appreciate the hand ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2015 10:19:00 AM

I would put a period after heart and then put "Undoes me with his cries" as a separate sentence. You did do it right but I like the two thoughts being separated. I hope this makes sense. Hugs Rick.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/31/2015 10:27:00 AM

I does done it as you said. Thank you, Rick ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2015 9:46:00 AM

Consider changing undo to undoes. I think the tense fits better. It is indeed beautiful. Happy New Year Cay Cay.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/31/2015 9:56:00 AM

"Enchanting sky-blue eyes, undo me when he cries" - the line between is between commas. I wish I could ask you ('hello') to respond now - I think I have it right. Thank you, Richard - I am a thinking 'bout it and I appreciate you ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 12/31/2015 6:38:00 AM

Made me have a lump in my throat thinking of my own son when he was tiny - delightful write CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2015 5:01:00 PM

I always read my comments and the replies:-) love the amendments :-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/31/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thank you, Sweetie. Don't know that you'll read this, but I completely revised it - the lines woke me up, they wanted me to change them, I just know it ... CayCay