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Beautiful Angel

Your eyes shine like the moonlight They shine in my darkest nights Glowing with beauty, sparkling with tenderness Oh how beautiful how unique How hopeful my heart is! It is you who poured joy into my soul I cannot resist the way you look at me! My heart beats ten times faster My body melts leaning on your warm chest Your passion is a pleasurable fire Your passion is an erotic flame You are the man I have always dreamed of! I am a starving beast I am a passionate lover! I hunger for your utter love I thirst for your irresistible touch Your beauty is nondescript Your face is a priceless masterpiece Artists cannot combine such beauty in a painting For, your beauty is etched by the hands of Gods! Your eyes… they fuel my fire Your long eyelashes dance with the beat of my heart Oh my Beautiful Angel you are one of a kind! You are a precious gift delivered from the heavens Forsake me not! I was lost but now I have found you I have found myself when I found you How cherished is your compassion How treasured are your words My heart veins bowed to you You’re too good to be true… Vivo Sadek

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 9:09:00 PM
Hi Vivo, i like your poem..... SKAT
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Date: 5/3/2013 7:30:00 AM
Thank you for your fine poem, you write very well Vivo. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and poems here with us. - Wish you all the best. - (Give comments, to get back) - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:39:00 PM
ViVO, this is filled with honesty, and great emotions... Love the way you expressed the poem. , Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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Vivo Sadek
Date: 5/2/2013 11:39:00 AM
wow! i am so pleased to meet you Linda:) it is such an honor to recieve such a support from you! thank you so much and i am so glad you liked my poem! i will surely check your contest:) Eileen told me you are a Goddess in poetry!! i will check your poems right now! God bless
Date: 5/1/2013 3:16:00 AM
Absolutely amazing, my sweet! I'm so so proud of you! :) This is an incredible write. I'm sure your inspiration was amazing to have produced this work in you! ;) Hope you get more and more views! hugs to you!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2013 2:42:00 PM
We are here for each other. You will shine, my dear...you already do!
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Vivo Sadek
Date: 5/2/2013 11:43:00 AM
habibiii Miss Eileen! i am so glad to have you by my side<3

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