Beautiful

Beautiful blue eyes that gently beguile, Enchantingly sparkle,winsomely smile And fragrances perfume her soothing caress Uplifting my senses, alluring temptress. Touching and trembling with thrills of delight, It's beauty is shown in hands holding tight. Fleeting those moments, where whispers are true. Untainted by time, when we say, i love you. Love is the answer, my beautiful wife.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2016 12:31:00 AM

George, Congratulations on your "Beautiful-Acrostic Win." ~LINDA~

George Seal
Date: 1/6/2016 3:19:00 PM

Hi LINDA, thankyou for your support, i do appreciate you doing so. My kindest regards to you. George.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/5/2016 1:16:00 PM

Super couplet rhyming, until you reach the last, and most important line 'Love is the answer, my beautiful wife.' A superb ACROSTIC!! Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 6:11:00 PM

Seriously, I wouldn't change a thing, and to hell with the judges if they can't see that you HAD to write it that way. Happy New Year to you too my friend.

George Seal
Date: 1/5/2016 4:30:00 PM

Hi Keith, thankyou for mentioning that last line. I was in a bit of a quandry over this as it was an odd line. The sponsor posed the question what we considered to be beautiful. That was my reply. Please reply if you have an alternative solution. My warmest regards and a happy New Year to you. George