Beautiful

Breathtakingly pleasing to the senses,
Exquisite to the point your heart tenses.
A balance of both perfection and flaw,
Uniquely designed to elicit awe.
Transcending the world of ordinary,
It surpasses the extraordinary.
Flawless to the eye of the beholder,
Uncannily fair; strikingly bolder,
Like Atlas with the world on His shoulder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gazbowski Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Enchanting write Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Lenny, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
A   Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:33 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your "Beautiful-Acrostic Win." ~LINDA~
Pinet Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Thanks LINDA, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Shahein Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 6:33 PM
Congrats on ur win you definitely deserve it with this beautiful poem, enjoyed every little word of it....hugs / / :) dalia
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Thanks Dalia, you continue to honor me and I am so grateful for your support. Emile.
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:16 PM
EMILE, CONGRATS on your win. skat
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Thanks Emile, was an excellent read, especially enjoyed the rhyme. Thanks for participating, and congrats on your placement.
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate both the opportunity to participate and the placement in your contest. Emile.
Lane Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 7:13 PM
This was so very sweet to read, Emile. Congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Thanks Lin, your visits are encouraging. Emile.
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:24 PM
This is very beautiful Emile congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thanks Jan, your visits are appreciated. Emile.
Negron Flores Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Emile.
Pinet Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thanks Nayda, your visits are appreciated. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 4:05 AM
What a beauty Emile.. that's so true.. best wishes!
Pinet Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:04 AM
Thanks Upma, your visits are appreciated. Emile.
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