Notes About The Poem

Beautiful


Baby birds on a branch, musically twittering,
Evening sunsets and dawns radiant and wonderful;
Animals, great and small, all these are so fascinating,
Utterly lovely is a forest draped in tangled vines graceful.
To me, all these things are divine, sublime and so alluring,
Incredible, exquisite things inspire me to write poems delightful;
Family stories told by elders, in the night with candlelight flickering,
Until the end of time, I will write of these things that make life colorful.
Lovely scenes of creatures grazing and horses in a meadow, free and running,
Light upon my garden flowers, snowflakes falling and all things, oh so beautiful.

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December 28, 2015

Acrostic/Rhyme

For the contest, Beautiful Acrostic, sponsor, John Hamilton

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 6, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your "Beautiful-Acrostic Win." ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Thank you Linda
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:17 PM
BROKEN, CONGRATS on your win. skat
La France Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Skat, thanks for the congrats !
Lane Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Everything you described is beautiful to me. Very well done and a truly beautiful acrostic.
La France Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the beautiful ~
Scars Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Broken Wings.. you have painted such lively imagery in your poem. It's so refreshing and uplifting. I love the usage of snowflakes, as well as garden flowers :) *smiles* -luloo
La France Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Laura, thank you for that lovely comment and the smiles ~
Haight Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Such nice imagery of all the things that inspire you, BW. Congratulations on your placement for this beautiful Acrostic poem. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Sandra, thanks for the congratulations and for the beautiful and the hugs ~
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:29 PM
A real beauty Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:36 PM
Jan, oh thanks for the beauty and the congrats, and of course the hugs, appreciate ~
Negron Flores Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW.
La France Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Nayda, congratulations is such a beautiful word, thank you ~
Shahein Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 9:03 AM
What an extraordinary write my dear , I'm in love with this one , I really love the word of beautiful and u used it in mesmerizing way...hugs / / :) dalia
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Dalia, oh two words I love extraordinary and mesmerizing, thank you ~
Cheema Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 5:07 AM
What a perfect match of thought and imagery! Good luck!
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Balveen, thanks for the lovely comment ~
A. Sharma Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 4:09 AM
Ah this is a real beauty Broken.. sure will fly to top.. best wishes!!
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Upma, thanks for the forever support ~
Tor Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 5:51 PM
An exceptional write. Love all the examples you used Constance.
La France Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Michael, thanks so much for the visit, and gosh I love that word exceptional ~
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 2:50 PM
- A beautiful poem to this lovely picture at the top, B.W. - Luck in contest !- Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks so much for the beautiful and the lovely and happy new year to you also ~
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