Beautiful

You consider yourself average on a good day,
somewhat pretty on a whimsical day,
and downright atrocious on a bad day.
Your hair can’t decide to be straight or curly.
Your eyes are either luminous or dreary.
Your nose…too big.
Lips…to small.
Nothing looks right at all.
That’s why we have doctors. 
Doctors to cure the horrible genes inflicted on you.
Doctors that can construct an artificial being,
made out of your lack of self-confidence, 
and belief in self-mutilation. 
Doctors that say they can make you beautiful.
Claiming that you aren’t beautiful now.
But you let them…
You let them call you ugly.
Let them plaster your face with assurances,
and guarantees.
In order to make you beautiful.
They cut your face.
Remake something that was already good, 
Into something worse.
Doctors that give you a lie.
Doctors that pledge to fix something
when they mean to break it. 
They say you are ugly.
You aren’t pretty.
No, you definitely are not pretty.
You’re beautiful.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 5, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Hi Paige, thank you for the nice reply on my comment. LINDA
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November 3, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Paige, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3
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November 5, 2015 at 6:22 PM
Thank you so much for your support! :)
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November 3, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Congrats on ur superb win Paige with this amazing write!
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November 5, 2015 at 6:22 PM
Thank you sooooo much!!!!
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November 2, 2015 at 11:50 PM
Paige, Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~
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November 5, 2015 at 6:22 PM
Of course I'll look at it! Thank you so much!
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December 7, 2014 at 7:47 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Paige - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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February 17, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Thank you so much! :)
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December 1, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Paige, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
Clinton Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Thank you very much! Hi! I love your poetry!
Croft Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Wow haha you are very good at making your point with creative passion.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 5:46 PM
Very interesting write - have seen some plastic surgery disasters - shame beauty is seen as what is on the outside - true beauty is what is on the inside and that is what matters:-) Hugs jan xxx
Clinton Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Thanks! Same here. True beauty is on the inside!;)
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