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A fictional love story - Wtitten 23rd August 2023 - Beautiful or Broken Word Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France

Never allow dreams to drift off in smoke For dreamers wishes come wrapped up in hope.Quote - Poet’s own Beneath a silvery starry night Two lovers swoon in intense delight You and me in my beautiful dreams Creating magic beneath moon beams. Blessed in splendour of the glitzy night Wrapped in loving arms our hearts ignite Sharing kisses from soft velvet lips Away we drift in spiralling flips. Every tender, rapturous caress Is music to my soul, I confess A taste of how heavenly it'd be Sharing this love for eternity. We dance up close, most seductively Our hips gyrating impulsively A prelude to a magical night Love in a mystical dreamers tryst. Never have I loved this way before My heart has become an open door A door only you may enter in For you have crept underneath my skin. Your love light outshines each bright star Perfection to me, is what you are The music, the whispers whilst dancing All I crave is in your romancing. Wish the vision would stay forever In this dreamland of never, never A simulated reality In sleeps screen movie of ecstasy. Desire you, need you, love you dearly I couldn’t live on if you should leave me Though you only visit in a dream In beautiful dreams I am your queen.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2023 11:55:00 PM

Belle, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the image, Constance

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/11/2023 12:39:00 AM

Thank you Constance, it was a pleasure to take part in the contest… Belle

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/26/2023 9:25:00 PM

Great writing. The last lines are very grand. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/27/2023 12:52:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj, very much appreciated… Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/26/2023 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/26/2023 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Paula. Have a great day too… Belle

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/24/2023 11:49:00 PM

So, so romantic Belle. Flows beautifully with intense passion. I loved it! Thank you for sharing. Keep dreaming ……

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/26/2023 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Christina, I’m so pleased you loved the read. I will dream on… Belle

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/23/2023 7:12:00 AM

Belle, this vividly descriptive, ultra-romantic, lovely piece GOT ME at the end. Janice

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/23/2023 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Janice for reading and delightful comments… Belle

Lin Lane

Date: 8/23/2023 5:07:00 AM

“Love is a mystical dreamers tryst.” Oh indeed it is, Belle. Your honeyed words are as beautifully written as any love could be.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/23/2023 6:11:00 AM

Thank you for that Lin, very appreciated… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2023 5:00:00 AM

- Beautiful and romantic, Belle ... a dream poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/23/2023 6:09:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, Hugs in return. Belle :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/22/2023 11:25:00 PM

Oozing with romance and passion Belle, so well written. Best of luck in the contest. Hope you're both well. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/23/2023 12:24:00 AM

Thank you Tom, your words mean a lot, it makes the writing so worthwhile, it’s started my day off with a smile. We’re both well, hope you and yours are too… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/22/2023 6:42:00 PM

It was a great pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Belle. Your eloquent lines are like a delicately woven tapestry. Your captivating diction perfectly captures the harmonious interplay of vibrant thoughts deep within your poetic talent. BOL is in the contest"

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/23/2023 12:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Sotto, it was a great pleasure’s to read your comments first thing this morning, I’m pleased and honoured by your words, most encouraging… Belle

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/22/2023 5:12:00 PM

such a lovely declaration, has to be listened, thanks

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/22/2023 5:20:00 PM

Thank you very much much Yann… Belle