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A fictional love story - Wtitten 23rd August 2023 - Beautiful or Broken Word Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 

Beautiful

Never allow dreams to drift off in smoke For dreamers wishes come wrapped up in hope.
Quote - Poet’s own
Beneath a silvery starry night Two lovers swoon in intense delight You and me in my beautiful dreams Creating magic beneath moon beams. Blessed in splendour of the glitzy night Wrapped in loving arms our hearts ignite Sharing kisses from soft velvet lips Away we drift in spiralling flips. Every tender, rapturous caress Is music to my soul, I confess A taste of how heavenly it'd be Sharing this love for eternity. We dance up close, most seductively Our hips gyrating impulsively A prelude to a magical night Love in a mystical dreamers tryst. Never have I loved this way before My heart has become an open door A door only you may enter in For you have crept underneath my skin. Your love light outshines each bright star Perfection to me, is what you are The music, the whispers whilst dancing All I crave is in your romancing. Wish the vision would stay forever In this dreamland of never, never A simulated reality In sleeps screen movie of ecstasy. Desire you, need you, love you dearly I couldn’t live on if you should leave me Though you only visit in a dream In beautiful dreams I am your queen.
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La France Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:55 PM
Belle, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the image, Constance
Edmonds  Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:39 AM
Thank you Constance, it was a pleasure to take part in the contest… Belle
Alex Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:25 PM
Great writing. The last lines are very grand. Congratulations!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 12:52 AM
Thank you Christuraj, very much appreciated… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
Edmonds  Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Paula. Have a great day too… Belle
Bowring Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 11:49 PM
So, so romantic Belle. Flows beautifully with intense passion. I loved it! Thank you for sharing. Keep dreaming ……
Edmonds  Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Thank you so much Christina, I’m so pleased you loved the read. I will dream on… Belle
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:12 AM
Belle, this vividly descriptive, ultra-romantic, lovely piece GOT ME at the end. Janice
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Janice for reading and delightful comments… Belle
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:07 AM
“Love is a mystical dreamers tryst.” Oh indeed it is, Belle. Your honeyed words are as beautifully written as any love could be.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Thank you for that Lin, very appreciated… Belle
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:00 AM
- Beautiful and romantic, Belle ... a dream poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 6:09 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, Hugs in return. Belle :)
Cunningham Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 11:25 PM
Oozing with romance and passion Belle, so well written. Best of luck in the contest. Hope you're both well. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 12:24 AM
Thank you Tom, your words mean a lot, it makes the writing so worthwhile, it’s started my day off with a smile. We’re both well, hope you and yours are too… Belle
Poet Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 6:42 PM
It was a great pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Belle. Your eloquent lines are like a delicately woven tapestry. Your captivating diction perfectly captures the harmonious interplay of vibrant thoughts deep within your poetic talent. BOL is in the contest"
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 12:20 AM
Thank you so much Sotto, it was a great pleasure’s to read your comments first thing this morning, I’m pleased and honoured by your words, most encouraging… Belle
Rolland Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:12 PM
such a lovely declaration, has to be listened, thanks
Edmonds  Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:20 PM
Thank you very much much Yann… Belle
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