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(B)right sunshine paints the snow (E)nlightening visions come alive (A) winter day brings striking beauty (U)nveiling the light in my soul (T)rees bring delicate shadows (I)nviting me to walk with stillness (F)orging through trouble, calmly (U)nderstanding winter’s message (L)ight of love in a cold beautiful day Heidi Sands 1/29/23 Placed 2nd in the the Writing Challenge B Contest. Sponsor: Constance LaFrance Theme word Chosen: Beautiful

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:43:00 AM
Heidi, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2023 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Constance :)
Date: 2/2/2023 9:50:00 AM
Lovely Acrostic, Heidi. Congratulations!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thank you Ann :)
Date: 2/1/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/lovely Acrostic write/picture. Have a blessed day..........
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thank you Paula :)
Date: 2/1/2023 6:19:00 AM
Winter has its own lovely message, Congrats on your win Heidi, hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 1/30/2023 12:40:00 PM
- Lovely written, Heidi :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2023 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine :)
Date: 1/30/2023 9:31:00 AM
A great contrast of realitys Constance, Its a strong read.' I see also You have put an entry in my current (hit list or Kill list contest.) As always you pay good Attention to details.' I see you have put a name To the list, so it must exist ' I was told there are Some as young as 13 years old on it.? I Suppose time will tell.' Thank you for your Support.'
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2023 9:14:00 PM
Joe, I didn't enter your contest?
Date: 1/30/2023 7:01:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the Constance's contest to me. Way to go. It seems like a lovely scene as the in the picture. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2023 9:13:00 PM
Thank you Sara :)
Date: 1/29/2023 9:38:00 PM
A beautiful scene you paint, Heidi:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2023 3:31:00 AM
Thank you Jo :)
Date: 1/29/2023 7:49:00 PM
Your poem is BEAUTIFUL! And I truly enjoyed reading it.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2023 3:31:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed reading this. Thank you :)
Date: 1/29/2023 5:57:00 PM
Wonderful imagery fills this poem, making it a pleasure to read, Heidi. Good luck with the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/29/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Sotto , :)
Date: 1/29/2023 3:17:00 PM
There is beauty in frozen landscapes--as you so well convey in this acrostic, Heidi. Wishing you the best for your upcoming appointments. Feel better soon!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/29/2023 3:42:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay. Things are deteriorating rapidly
Date: 1/29/2023 1:37:00 PM
Dear Heidi, you capture the beauty and serenity of a snowy winter day with charming finesse. I especially adore your last verse, though all offer lovely imagery and feeling. I hope all is going well, my friend.. you’re in my thoughts. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/29/2023 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Susan Bless you. This is disrupting my life writing and creativity rapidly.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/29/2023 2:09:00 PM
I’m so sorry to know of your ordeal, Heidi. My thoughts and prayers are with you as you move forward with the necessary tests and the awful waiting for answers. Through it all, I know your lovely gifted pen will continue to flow..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/29/2023 1:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan. I appreciate your comment. I am doing ok. But my eye is getting worse. I am having great difficulty seeing and pain from the inflammation behind it. I have an app that allows me to speak to text and email now. I have a regular doctor appt tomorrow and will have MRI referral and Neorologist appt. But the eye specialist out of state is the most important thing that i am waiting for appointment scheduling. The hospital said it has to be this week. I hope all is well. :)

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