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Beautiful

(B)right sunshine paints the snow
(E)nlightening visions come alive
(A) winter day brings striking beauty
(U)nveiling the light in my soul
(T)rees bring delicate shadows
(I)nviting me to walk with stillness
(F)orging through trouble, calmly
(U)nderstanding winter’s message
(L)ight of love in a cold beautiful day

Heidi Sands

1/29/23

Placed 2nd in the  the Writing Challenge B Contest.  Sponsor:  Constance LaFrance
Theme word Chosen:  Beautiful

beautifuldaywinteracrostic

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Constance La France

February 4, 2023 at 7:43 AM

Heidi, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance

Heidi Sands

February 4, 2023 at 8:46 AM

Thank you Constance :)

Ann Peck

February 2, 2023 at 9:50 AM

Lovely Acrostic, Heidi. Congratulations!

Heidi Sands

February 3, 2023 at 8:19 AM

Thank you Ann :)

Paula Goldsmith

February 1, 2023 at 8:34 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/lovely Acrostic write/picture. Have a blessed day..........

Heidi Sands

February 3, 2023 at 8:19 AM

Thank you Paula :)

Joseph May

February 1, 2023 at 6:19 AM

Winter has its own lovely message, Congrats on your win Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands

February 3, 2023 at 8:19 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 30, 2023 at 12:40 PM

- Lovely written, Heidi :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

January 30, 2023 at 9:15 PM

Thank you Sunshine :)

Joe Maverick

January 30, 2023 at 9:31 AM

A great contrast of realitys Constance, Its a strong read.' I see also You have put an entry in my current (hit list or Kill list contest.) As always you pay good Attention to details.' I see you have put a name To the list, so it must exist ' I was told there are Some as young as 13 years old on it.? I Suppose time will tell.' Thank you for your Support.'

Heidi Sands

January 30, 2023 at 9:14 PM

Joe, I didn't enter your contest?

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2023 at 7:01 AM

Reads like a good contender for the Constance's contest to me. Way to go. It seems like a lovely scene as the in the picture. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Heidi Sands

January 30, 2023 at 9:13 PM

Thank you Sara :)

Joanna Daniel

January 29, 2023 at 9:38 PM

A beautiful scene you paint, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands

January 30, 2023 at 3:31 AM

Thank you Jo :)

Fin Chuuk

January 29, 2023 at 7:49 PM

Your poem is BEAUTIFUL! And I truly enjoyed reading it.

Heidi Sands

January 30, 2023 at 3:31 AM

I am happy you enjoyed reading this. Thank you :)

Sotto Poet

January 29, 2023 at 5:57 PM

Wonderful imagery fills this poem, making it a pleasure to read, Heidi. Good luck with the contest.

Heidi Sands

January 29, 2023 at 6:08 PM

Thank you very much Sotto , :)

Vijay Pandit

January 29, 2023 at 3:17 PM

There is beauty in frozen landscapes--as you so well convey in this acrostic, Heidi. Wishing you the best for your upcoming appointments. Feel better soon!

Heidi Sands

January 29, 2023 at 3:42 PM

Thank you very much Vijay. Things are deteriorating rapidly

Susan Ashley

January 29, 2023 at 1:37 PM

Dear Heidi, you capture the beauty and serenity of a snowy winter day with charming finesse. I especially adore your last verse, though all offer lovely imagery and feeling. I hope all is going well, my friend.. you’re in my thoughts. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands

January 29, 2023 at 3:41 PM

Thank you Susan Bless you. This is disrupting my life writing and creativity rapidly.

Susan Ashley

January 29, 2023 at 2:09 PM

I’m so sorry to know of your ordeal, Heidi. My thoughts and prayers are with you as you move forward with the necessary tests and the awful waiting for answers. Through it all, I know your lovely gifted pen will continue to flow..

Heidi Sands

January 29, 2023 at 1:48 PM

Thank you so much Susan. I appreciate your comment. I am doing ok. But my eye is getting worse. I am having great difficulty seeing and pain from the inflammation behind it. I have an app that allows me to speak to text and email now. I have a regular doctor appt tomorrow and will have MRI referral and Neorologist appt. But the eye specialist out of state is the most important thing that i am waiting for appointment scheduling. The hospital said it has to be this week. I hope all is well. :)

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