Beautiful

aquamarine horizon with crimson hue,
                          unfolds a sublime picture of dawn,
                     drowns the senses in tender lilac dreams,
                      sways away to a mythical land unknown.

                   spring birds merrily cooing songs serenade,
                   saffron imagination dawns on dreamy eyes
                swirling all vibrant colours of rainbow in palette,
                   fragrant petite graceful flowers wake us up,

                    chartreuse waterfalls falls soft on coral rocks,
                         dazzling moon takes the centre spot,
                      mighty ocean poses as the mirror for her.
                    from tiniest seashells to icy mountain-peaks,
                   indomitable sand-dunes to snow-clad evergreens...
                                      beautiful world!
                 lavender yearning for magic fills my passionate heart.

                             Beauty, an undefinable definition,
                                                 exists around us....in
                          beautiful moments, beautiful scenerios,
                                                  beautiful emotions...
                         to be unravelled to the beholder 
                                    who marvels at the exquisite bounty of the miraculous!



                                 
                                          January 29, 2023
                     Writing Challenge - "B" word Poetry Contest
                               Sponsor: Constance La France

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/3/2023 5:34:00 PM

Mala, I have been away for awhile . So very happen to come upon such lovely descriptive beauty you have painted with your words ! Yes beauty is everywhere if we look . Receiving it is a gift . Hugs to you , Susan :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/6/2023 4:31:00 AM

Dear Susan, what a co-incidence! I had been away for a while too - completing a few projects in my home-language while vacationing in India. I am back, still having terrible jet lag. Hope to come back soon with full energy!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/20/2023 6:43:00 AM

What an incredibly charming poem, i love your use of exotic colors to describe and create and project an image of a scene in your every single stanza - well penned Malabika. Beauty does exist, if we look and search with eager open eyes. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/6/2023 4:28:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Jennifer. I am truly delighted to receive your comment - also glad you liked the use of exotic colours for portraying a scene. I often read your poems - find them so creative!

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 2/17/2023 2:23:00 PM

How true Mala! Beautifully penned!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/6/2023 4:25:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Smita. Truly appreciate your comment.

Constance La France

Date: 2/4/2023 7:36:00 AM

Mala, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/5/2023 2:34:00 AM

Thank you, Constance. Really appreciate.

Michael Tor

Date: 2/3/2023 12:41:00 PM

Such a lovely surroundings you have described so eloquently Mala. I really enjoyed the picturesque imagery you created with your perfect words. A favorite. God bless you...

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/5/2023 2:34:00 AM

Thank you, Michael, for your encouraging comments, and for the "Fave".