Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Free verse

Beautiful

aquamarine horizon with crimson hue,
                          unfolds a sublime picture of dawn,
                     drowns the senses in tender lilac dreams,
                      sways away to a mythical land unknown.

                   spring birds merrily cooing songs serenade,
                   saffron imagination dawns on dreamy eyes
                swirling all vibrant colours of rainbow in palette,
                   fragrant petite graceful flowers wake us up,

                    chartreuse waterfalls falls soft on coral rocks,
                         dazzling moon takes the centre spot,
                      mighty ocean poses as the mirror for her.
                    from tiniest seashells to icy mountain-peaks,
                   indomitable sand-dunes to snow-clad evergreens...
                                      beautiful world!
                 lavender yearning for magic fills my passionate heart.

                             Beauty, an undefinable definition,
                                                 exists around us....in
                          beautiful moments, beautiful scenerios,
                                                  beautiful emotions...
                         to be unravelled to the beholder 
                                    who marvels at the exquisite bounty of the miraculous!



                                 
                                          January 29, 2023
                     Writing Challenge - "B" word Poetry Contest
                               Sponsor: Constance La France

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Susan Lawrence March 3, 2023 at 5:34 PM Mala, I have been away for awhile . So very happen to come upon such lovely descriptive beauty you have painted with your words ! Yes beauty is everywhere if we look . Receiving it is a gift . Hugs to you , Susan :) Malabika Ray Choudhury March 6, 2023 at 4:31 AM Dear Susan, what a co-incidence! I had been away for a while too - completing a few projects in my home-language while vacationing in India. I am back, still having terrible jet lag. Hope to come back soon with full energy!

Jennifer Proxenos February 20, 2023 at 6:43 AM What an incredibly charming poem, i love your use of exotic colors to describe and create and project an image of a scene in your every single stanza - well penned Malabika. Beauty does exist, if we look and search with eager open eyes. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Malabika Ray Choudhury March 6, 2023 at 4:28 AM Thank you, Dear Jennifer. I am truly delighted to receive your comment - also glad you liked the use of exotic colours for portraying a scene. I often read your poems - find them so creative!

Smita Kulkarni February 17, 2023 at 2:23 PM How true Mala! Beautifully penned! Malabika Ray Choudhury March 6, 2023 at 4:25 AM Thank you, Dear Smita. Truly appreciate your comment.

Constance La France February 4, 2023 at 7:36 AM Mala, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance Malabika Ray Choudhury February 5, 2023 at 2:34 AM Thank you, Constance. Really appreciate.

Michael Tor February 3, 2023 at 12:41 PM Such a lovely surroundings you have described so eloquently Mala. I really enjoyed the picturesque imagery you created with your perfect words. A favorite. God bless you... Malabika Ray Choudhury February 5, 2023 at 2:34 AM Thank you, Michael, for your encouraging comments, and for the "Fave".

Sara Kendrick February 1, 2023 at 2:02 PM Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara Malabika Ray Choudhury February 2, 2023 at 10:48 PM Thank you, Sara. Your inspiring words are truly appreciated.

Paula Goldsmith February 1, 2023 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/wonderful/colorful write. Yes, if we will only see it. Have a blessed day.......... Malabika Ray Choudhury February 2, 2023 at 10:48 PM Thank you, Paula. Appreciate your inspiring words.

Joseph May January 30, 2023 at 7:44 AM I love the colorful images in your poem Mala, best wishes in the contest

Victor Buhagiar January 30, 2023 at 1:58 AM This poem is magical. Your imagery is of the highest quality. I am sure you will rate it high. Best for a win, I have no doubts about it. Malabika Ray Choudhury January 30, 2023 at 5:26 AM Thank you, Victor. I feel really honoured with your inspiring comment. Warm wishes ~ Mala

Deb M January 29, 2023 at 2:23 AM One word for your poem Malabika “Beautiful”!!! Debx Malabika Ray Choudhury January 30, 2023 at 5:27 AM Dear Deb, so delighted to read your comment. You have made my day! Warm wishes ~ Mala