Beauties Tainted

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Autumn Quotes & Fall Quotes and Captions to Enchant and Deepen the Soul! [Updated for 2020] | Autumn quotes, Nature quotes inspirational, Autumn quotes inspirational

On a beautiful Fall day I go for a walk, the trees are changing on my block, birds are chirping . . . I hear the loud call of a hawk. In the fading park the sweet ducks are still drifting, around the season is shifting, I love this change . . . oh those colored leaves are uplifting. The Maples, Birch and Aspen by nature painted, all the falling beauties tainted, fluttering down . . . the trees have been finger-painted. ________________________ September 13, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Beauties Tainted Copyright Protected, ID 20-1286-417-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Autumn-Fall Rhyme Challenge sponsor, Tania Kitchin Ninth Place

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/18/2020 3:19:00 PM

Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful poem, loved "the trees have been finger-painted" gorgeous!

Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2020 8:45:00 AM

Tania, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement, I love that line also, it just came to me while looking at the trees outside my window _Constance

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/13/2020 7:41:00 AM

Loved the last line best. A lovely season. ~~

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2020 10:01:00 AM

Victor, thank you so much for the visit, I love that line too, it just came to me _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/13/2020 7:02:00 AM

- The hawk flies over my roof every day ... but it has a powerful voice - A lovely autumn poem with beautiful sky color, Constance :) - I'm coming back when it's done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2020 10:02:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thanks for coming back to read the finished poem and thanks for the compliment, appreciate _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2020 10:07:00 AM

- I knew it would be beautiful :)