Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Beauties Tainted

On a beautiful Fall day I go for a walk,
the trees are changing on my block,
birds are chirping . . . 
I hear the loud call of a hawk.

In the fading park the sweet ducks are still drifting,
around the season is shifting,
I love this change . . . 
oh those colored leaves are uplifting.

The Maples, Birch and Aspen by nature painted, 
all the falling beauties tainted,
fluttering down . . . 
the trees have been finger-painted.

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September 13, 2020


Poetry/Rhyme/Beauties Tainted
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1286-417-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the Premier contest, Autumn-Fall Rhyme Challenge
sponsor, Tania Kitchin

Ninth Place

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Tania Kitchin September 18, 2020 at 3:19 PM Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful poem, loved "the trees have been finger-painted" gorgeous! Constance La France September 19, 2020 at 8:45 AM Tania, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement, I love that line also, it just came to me while looking at the trees outside my window _Constance

Victor Buhagiar September 13, 2020 at 7:41 AM Loved the last line best. A lovely season. ~~ Constance La France September 14, 2020 at 10:01 AM Victor, thank you so much for the visit, I love that line too, it just came to me _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2020 at 7:02 AM - The hawk flies over my roof every day ... but it has a powerful voice - A lovely autumn poem with beautiful sky color, Constance :) - I'm coming back when it's done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France September 14, 2020 at 10:02 AM Anne-Lise, thanks for coming back to read the finished poem and thanks for the compliment, appreciate _Constance Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2020 at 10:07 AM - I knew it would be beautiful :)