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Beats of stillness

nature digs in deep rooted in beauty's purpose can you hear its beat?

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/5/2024 4:59:00 PM

Dear Dietra, This is a profound meditation on the essence of nature and its quiet yet resounding presence in our lives. You capture the depth and purpose inherent in the natural world, inviting me the reader to listen closely to its steady rhythm. The simplicity of your words belies the profound truth they convey: that amidst the chaos of life, nature remains rooted in its beauty and purpose, its heartbeat echoing through the stillness. I enjoyed your Haiku and a fav. Blessings, Daniel

Dietra Reid
Date: 2/6/2024 2:38:00 PM

Dear Daniel. thank you very much for your kind and encouraging words. Take care