Beat

let my heart stop pounding
beat beat beat pulse
will surely choke me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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La France Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 8:42 PM
I think this poem is breathtaking, beat, beat, beat~~~
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Zera. Love, Carol
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August 29, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Cool and creative Zera... enjoyed your depiction of the heart and its intensity.. there are many contest on the Soup .... check them out and enter.. good luck..luv..
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August 29, 2010 at 7:51 PM
i feel a race in this one lol, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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