Beat

let my heart stop pounding beat beat beat pulse will surely choke me

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Constance La France

Date: 8/30/2010 8:42:00 PM

I think this poem is breathtaking, beat, beat, beat~~~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 10:28:00 AM

Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Zera. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2010 7:51:00 PM

i feel a race in this one lol, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 7:51:00 PM

Cool and creative Zera... enjoyed your depiction of the heart and its intensity.. there are many contest on the Soup .... check them out and enter.. good luck..luv..