Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- Beast -

                                         The creature
                                     Denies criminal guilt
                                                Pain
                                              Torture

                                          Bodily injury
                                  Captivated and frightened
                                     unreflected thoughts
                                         





24/09/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Paint A Picture 
7 lines and 14 Words using the Septolet form
Sponsored by: Joseph May
3rd place in the contest

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Paul Callus October 2, 2020 at 8:17 AM Pleased to return with congratulations, Anne-Lise! Well done! Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 8:18 AM - Thank you very much for your congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos October 2, 2020 at 6:54 AM Congratulations my friend on your win in this contest - I really enjoyed your pic and your write. have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:00 AM - Thank you very much for your congratulations, dear Jenny :) - Have a wonderful weekend you too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilene Evans October 1, 2020 at 1:38 PM Congratulations on your win!!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 1:39 AM - Thank you very much for your congratulations, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May October 1, 2020 at 8:33 AM A scary beast Anne, Nicely penned, Congrats on your win Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 1:40 AM - Many thanks for my win in your contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler October 1, 2020 at 5:54 AM Scary writing Anne-Lise. :)) Congratulations on the win! {} Linda Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 1:38 AM - Linda. thank you very much for your comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 26, 2020 at 4:15 PM oh my, frightening! I had forgotten this is one of the pictures. You chose a good one! Anne-Lise Andresen September 27, 2020 at 12:34 AM - Many thanks for your visit, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman September 24, 2020 at 9:32 PM Wow you sure paint a wonderful picture here, Anne-Lise, such colourful words..good luck in contest Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 1:37 AM - Many thanks for visiting and supporting, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph P. DiMino September 24, 2020 at 3:43 PM Me before my coffee.... We are double minded -- sadly a little creature in all of us. If not for the grace of God.... Sunshine, is the art work yours also? Great form. Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 1:35 AM - I'd be afraid to wake up in the same house as you, Joe :))) - Thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus September 24, 2020 at 2:49 PM An excellent rendition of the Septolet form, Anne-Lise. Many are those who live in denial! Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 1:32 AM - Yes, many Paul ... never waste your time denying reality - Thank you very much for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands September 24, 2020 at 12:12 PM Great one. Well done, Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 12:39 PM - Thank you very much for your support, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos September 24, 2020 at 10:12 AM Wow my friend, so well and creatively written, good luck in the contest dear soul sister. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 12:38 PM - They always feel "hungry", dear Jenny - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar September 24, 2020 at 6:12 AM Indeed only a beast do not think, much to his down fall. Wise poem. ~~ Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 12:25 PM - A beast has only evil thoughts - They are manipulative and we are their victims, Victor - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan September 24, 2020 at 5:20 AM He sure looks beastly to me, Anne-Lise. Kind of like a troll. Good luck with this well-formed entry. Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 12:20 PM - Trolls are usually kind, Jenna :) - Thank you very much for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 5:15 AM You painted the beast in your words--well done, Anne-Lise. All the best. Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 12:18 PM - Thank you very much for your support, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 24, 2020 at 4:11 AM Anne-Lise you certainly painted a vivid picture in so few words!:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 12:17 PM - Had to fix it a bit ... hope it got better ... thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann September 24, 2020 at 2:09 AM Nice one. Good luck in the contest for you too ... Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 12:15 PM - Many thanks for your comments and wishes, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)