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Bear Creek Valley

The pin oak leaves from dormant trees, fall on this crisp autumn morn, as I paint the scene of an artist’s dream; in my mind this landscapes born. The patch work green is this valleys scene, with broken squares of chocolate earth, where I look across the Bear Creek flowing, to the rising of Mount Worth. From the autumn cold, red, brown and gold, blotch the maples three pronged leaves. There's the tussock grass in a swampy pass, close where the Bear Creek weaves. From terrain seams these gully streams, flow in drains beyond the girth, where I look across the Bear Creek flowing, to the rising of Mount Worth. Gold finches sung on a fence wire rung; flit to feed on winter grass. Starlings circle and whirl; land as wings furl. A Raven caws as it fly's past. Cotoneaster berries quiver; cause of the shiver, is a White Eye warbling its mirth, where I look across the Bear Creek flowing, to the rising of Mount Worth. The fence line’s straight broken by a gate, each side of the cattle lane. There is easily seen a different green, where a paddock’s rested again. The sound of a pump starting up, drives water to a cattle trough berth, where I look across the Bear Creek flowing, To the rising of Mount Worth. From milking sheds cows bow their heads, grazing on the lush-full grass. Two Shellducks glide side by side, ever lower as they pass. Poplar trees having lost their leaves, stand idle ‘til a spring rebirth, where I look across the Bear Creek flowing, to the rising of Mount Worth. Undulating slopes where the pine tree copes, surround the scar of a quarry's gash. There's the natural bush that survived the push, below the mighty Mountain Ash. A corner stacked of silage wrapped, prepared for a winters dearth, where I look across the Bear Creek valley, to the rising of Mount Worth. My eyes they seek the mountain peak, denied by the misty cloud. First gum trees welcome the breeze, that moves the cloud mass out. The sun shines bright to brilliant light, ‘til shadows drift across again, this time more gray - so much closer … Mount Worth is lost behind the rain.

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Date: 10/28/2019 5:25:00 AM
Hi Lindsay! This poem sure took me for a delightful ride along Bear Creek...it seems like a Bear Creek Song, complete with a Chorus! I felt as if I was right there with you at Bear Creek and Mount Worth! I so enjoyed it! I live in SW Utah, USA. Hugs and keep on writing! :)
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/29/2019 6:32:00 PM
G'day Lydia … thank you for reading and leaving a comment Lydia. Distance wise, we are a long way apart. I live in Southern Victoria Australia, but I gather we both share a love for nature - thank you Lydia - Lindsay
Date: 6/5/2019 10:39:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery! You take us on your tour!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/6/2019 6:21:00 PM
G'day Kim … I was sitting on a veranda, gazing across bear creek valley one still autumn morning at this scene, and of course that's when my poetic juices began to flow - thank you Kim - Lindsay
Date: 6/5/2019 9:22:00 PM
Thanks for guiding me on a delightful, image-packed tour of 'Bear Creek Valley.' And the admission price can't be beat. (Free parking as well; stay as long as you want!). Best wishes, Gershon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/6/2019 6:19:00 PM
Hello Gershon … thanks for your positive comment Gershon. As a writer, like most, we are very observant with what surrounds us and are lucky enough to be able to put our thoughts on paper - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 5/31/2019 1:52:00 PM
I reckon this would win any, "Paint by Words" contest! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/31/2019 6:52:00 PM
G'day Rico … I don't know about winning any contest, but yes, it is a picture poem. Practically all my nature poems are based on close observation - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 5/29/2019 1:27:00 PM
Lindsay - Australia is a continent of diverse attractions - something like Africa - the attraction for some to the bright city lights in your great cities and nature which beckons people seeking the natural beauty and simplicity of the open countryside and bushveld - love this poem Lindsay - so well penned and is so true of you, as it illustrates your intense love of nature. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/31/2019 6:50:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … isn't it great that we all have our great attractions and diversity. Both Africa and Australia are so vast with so much to witness that is different, especially in the fauna, but there is plenty of similarity too. Thank you for your great comment Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 5/25/2019 12:06:00 AM
Sounds like a great place to live and visit. Your poem give it great justice.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/31/2019 6:45:00 PM
Hello Timothy … I was staying on a farming property, sitting on a veranda and gazing across a valley to Mount Worth backdrop, and this is my observation - thanks again Timothy - Lindsay

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