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Bear and Salmon

Bear..... stone clad shores welt beneath your warmth fir lined trees stand silent in your presence misted waters raise to greet a vibrant sky in jubilation as salmon fight ferocious rapids you intent listen and watch baited breath silent your cumbersome claw hovers as a wieghtless mosquito dancing hithertoo for that oh so perfect catch titanium spray avoids your touch end the salmon's day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/3/2012 9:45:00 AM
this is no teddy bear. Okay - what is tyvm?
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Karen Deeks
Date: 6/3/2012 1:48:00 PM
oh sorry kathryn tyvm is thank you very much... :)
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Karen Deeks
Date: 6/3/2012 9:48:00 AM
ty for reading dear kathryn ... there certainly isnt though i did believe in teddy bears once,,, karen
Date: 6/3/2012 2:53:00 AM
the patience of a bear in need, who hovers silent for a feed, 4 a fish to suicide.... love it
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Karen Deeks
Date: 6/3/2012 2:55:00 AM
tyvm don, for your thoughts and comments....karen