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Beacon's Ray of Hope

beacon's ray of hope piercing dangerous darkness..... ship's happy siren guiding day and night its god like presence shining.... smile in sailor's face ===================== by:kashinath karmakar (10th September 2011) contest:In the light of haiku

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/12/2011 12:16:00 AM

A beautiful vision is this work of art you have created. It is comforting to think about a lighthouse in this way.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2011 1:52:00 PM

a glory for this one, kashi... delightful write, unique!.. winning wishes, bud! :) hugggs, nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/11/2011 3:08:00 AM

a mighty wonderful poem, and way of light,,, p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2011 10:31:00 PM

gosh, Kash, you had the same theme almost as mine going on here. I literally made my haiku be about God. I know it was not a real lighthouse but I just couldn't think of a way to write about an actual lighthouse. (love the way you are stretching yourself these days to write so many contest poems!)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2011 5:27:00 PM

This is just how sailors feel about the lighthouses, Kash. Lovely entry for the contest and I wish you success. Soup mail in a second. Love, Carolyn

Diane Christian

Date: 9/10/2011 11:59:00 AM

thanks for your kind comments and sorry late in reply not been on ehre much, I like this poem, because all our hope is in God snd our dreams, he always turns things round for good. God bless from diane

Fabiyas M V

Date: 9/10/2011 11:09:00 AM

Nice picture of light house,Kashi.A good entry for the contest.With love,Fabiyas

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/10/2011 7:47:00 AM

Very nice image and take on the contest, wishing you the best in the contest....Michael