Beacon Street Blues

What sort of homeless person would I be
Would I cart all these books everywhere with me
Would I scream and shout to keep the world at bay
Or would I nod and smile by my tin cup each day
Would I dress real well, try to look like a swell
Or would I let myself go, not put on a show
Would I turn to drugs or would I stick with booze
What would I have to lose
Would I rant and rave about equality
And how you look right through me
Or would I understand -
you need to keep what you’ve got
You don’t want to land in this spot
Would I have any hope, would there be any rope
Gone are the jobs that kept the unlucky on track
Now the squirrels are on crack, the humans on smack
The armpit of L.A. gets hairier by the day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bartley Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 12:54 PM
That was the best smelly poem I've read in a while. Thanks for sharing!
Dintlhoane Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 12:40 AM
thank You! for this poem Sharon, it really dug deep in me, some painful memories i never wanted to revisit, well written, well done
Cason Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 5:37 AM
So true, it hits home pas and sometimes at presence. Awesome
Woodrow Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 3:45 PM
I did go through a short period of homelessness...my vehicle was all I had for storage and I downsized like I could not believe...books were a luxury I had to let go..the relief of lightness though has been with me ever since... :)
Keely Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 8:10 AM
Glad that ordeal was short. I've moved a lot, jettisoning everything each time, it is freeing. I always find the books hardest to let go off.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Well done; so sincere and heartfelt my friend.
Keely Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Thanks Caren!
Neumann Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Heartfelt and poignant. Well done. Kind wishes, Kai
Keely Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Thanks Kai!
Hoffman Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 10:40 AM
Excellent reflection on the dark side of life. So apt for today.
Keely Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Thanks Franci!
Hladky Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 2:16 PM
This poem really resonated with me, having grown up in L.A. and helped at a food bank downtown. It's well written and relevant more than ever, given the current economic crisis, loss of jobs and evictions. I look forward to reading more of your poems. - Greg
Keely Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Thanks Greg; I called it Beacon Street because of the many living in tents there, in San Pedro. I don't like to think how much their numbers will grow when the current eviction moratorium ends.
Callus Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 1:12 PM
First poem of yours I'm commenting on, Sharon, though I already made it a point to go through some other poems of yours. I find your style serious and witty all in one. I'm truly impressed. Welcome to Soup! Regards // paul
Keely Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Many thanks Paul, I'm very grateful for this Soup community.
Liebenthal Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 12:09 AM
Excellent poem. Very well written. It makes the reader see the anguish and despair of homeless life. Good job
Keely Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Mike!
Bangalee Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 12:20 AM
Would I have any hope, would there be any rope/Gone are the jobs that kept the unlucky on track/ Now the squirrels are on crack, the humans on smack.......excellent poetic expression
Keely Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Thank you Mahtab!
Poetrysoup Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Hmmm, now we have to ponder this...
Leffanta Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Few would even think of the subject, so well thought and scribed! Aloha! Rico
Keely Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Rico - Aloha and Mahalo!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 11:59 AM
Powerful, provocative, and on point. I have actually pondered that myself here in poem. Great write Sharon. Welcome to the soup! ~Maureen
Keely Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Many thanks Maureen, you make me feel I've found my tribe! I'm looking forward to reading your poems tonight.
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