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Beacon Street Blues

What sort of homeless person would I be Would I cart all these books everywhere with me Would I scream and shout to keep the world at bay Or would I nod and smile by my tin cup each day Would I dress real well, try to look like a swell Or would I let myself go, not put on a show Would I turn to drugs or would I stick with booze What would I have to lose Would I rant and rave about equality And how you look right through me Or would I understand - you need to keep what you’ve got You don’t want to land in this spot Would I have any hope, would there be any rope Gone are the jobs that kept the unlucky on track Now the squirrels are on crack, the humans on smack The armpit of L.A. gets hairier by the day

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Date: 9/16/2020 5:37:00 AM
So true, it hits home pas and sometimes at presence. Awesome
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Date: 9/9/2020 3:45:00 PM
I did go through a short period of homelessness...my vehicle was all I had for storage and I downsized like I could not believe...books were a luxury I had to let go..the relief of lightness though has been with me ever since... :)
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Sharon Keely
Date: 9/10/2020 8:10:00 AM
Glad that ordeal was short. I've moved a lot, jettisoning everything each time, it is freeing. I always find the books hardest to let go off.
Date: 8/28/2020 1:04:00 PM
Well done; so sincere and heartfelt my friend.
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/29/2020 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Caren!
Date: 8/23/2020 3:36:00 AM
Heartfelt and poignant. Well done. Kind wishes, Kai
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/23/2020 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Kai!
Date: 8/21/2020 10:40:00 AM
Excellent reflection on the dark side of life. So apt for today.
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/23/2020 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Franci!
Date: 8/19/2020 2:16:00 PM
This poem really resonated with me, having grown up in L.A. and helped at a food bank downtown. It's well written and relevant more than ever, given the current economic crisis, loss of jobs and evictions. I look forward to reading more of your poems. - Greg
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/20/2020 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Greg; I called it Beacon Street because of the many living in tents there, in San Pedro. I don't like to think how much their numbers will grow when the current eviction moratorium ends.
Date: 8/19/2020 1:12:00 PM
First poem of yours I'm commenting on, Sharon, though I already made it a point to go through some other poems of yours. I find your style serious and witty all in one. I'm truly impressed. Welcome to Soup! Regards // paul
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/20/2020 9:52:00 AM
Many thanks Paul, I'm very grateful for this Soup community.
Date: 8/6/2020 12:09:00 AM
Excellent poem. Very well written. It makes the reader see the anguish and despair of homeless life. Good job
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/7/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Mike!
Date: 8/3/2020 12:20:00 AM
Would I have any hope, would there be any rope/Gone are the jobs that kept the unlucky on track/ Now the squirrels are on crack, the humans on smack.......excellent poetic expression
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Sharon Keely
Date: 8/3/2020 11:48:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab!
Date: 8/1/2020 8:31:00 AM
Hmmm, now we have to ponder this...
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Date: 7/30/2020 12:55:00 PM
Few would even think of the subject, so well thought and scribed! Aloha! Rico
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Sharon Keely
Date: 7/30/2020 6:24:00 PM
Rico - Aloha and Mahalo!
Date: 7/30/2020 11:59:00 AM
Powerful, provocative, and on point. I have actually pondered that myself here in poem. Great write Sharon. Welcome to the soup! ~Maureen
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Sharon Keely
Date: 7/30/2020 12:12:00 PM
Many thanks Maureen, you make me feel I've found my tribe! I'm looking forward to reading your poems tonight.

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