Faye Gibson Poet Footle

Beach Vacation

beach ball
kid sprawl

sand dune
swim soon

seaweed
fish feed

crab walk
gulls squawk

seashore
surf more

low tide
beach wide

seashell
snail dwell

beach sand
fun strand

Copyright, July 11, 2026

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Sara Kendrick July 17, 2026 at 4:21 PM Congratulations to you on your winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your winner. Sara K.

Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2026 at 5:32 AM Congrats, Faye!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2026 at 1:27 AM - Congratulations on your win in the footle contest, a pleasure to read Faye :) - hugs Faye Gibson July 17, 2026 at 7:32 AM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2026 at 12:05 AM Back with congrats. Well deserved

Karen Jones July 14, 2026 at 7:27 PM Faye congratulations on your top win for my contest. I love your beach theme it was a pleasure to read! Thanks for sharing and for your entry! Blessings

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2026 at 10:40 PM You did very well with your story in footle form. I like that you made sure everything rhymed perfectly. It is great to see you again

Alison A Smith nee Howarth July 11, 2026 at 8:01 PM Mmmmm - Beach vacation - sure sounds perfect.