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Beach Seat

Two girls With curls Sit near The peer See guy Walk by Big hat So fat He trips Then flips On Bum So stunned Best feat At beach. Written on 6/5/2015

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Jubok Dash Theke Chobbish

Date: 7/1/2015 5:02:00 AM

You write well Match well Textured well

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/12/2015 1:04:00 AM

Creates a great mental picture. Congrats, Laura. Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2015 11:15:00 PM

those ARE fun ones!!! Congrats for your win.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/11/2015 3:57:00 PM

Nicely done! ;)

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 2:51:00 PM

Laura :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/11/2015 3:28:00 PM

Thanks, Skat! Didn't know I got placed...yay! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/6/2015 2:27:00 PM

- Bravo, well done Laura - Good luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/6/2015 4:22:00 PM

Thanks, Anne Lise. Footles are fun :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/6/2015 5:39:00 AM

delightful scenes on the beach, lol.. i was all in, laura.. very fine!.. a winner for me..huggs

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/6/2015 1:21:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Nette! You are too kind :)