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Beach Seat

Two girls
With curls  

Sit near
The peer

See guy
Walk by

Big hat
So fat  

He trips
Then flips

On Bum
So stunned

Best feat
At beach.








Written on 6/5/2015

Copyright © Laura Leiser | Year Posted 2015

beachfunnyfootle

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Jubok Dash Theke Chobbish

July 1, 2015 at 5:02 AM

You write well Match well Textured well

June 12, 2015 at 1:04 AM

Creates a great mental picture. Congrats, Laura. Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2015 at 11:15 PM

those ARE fun ones!!! Congrats for your win.

June 11, 2015 at 3:57 PM

Nicely done! ;)

June 11, 2015 at 2:51 PM

Laura :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**

June 11, 2015 at 3:28 PM

Thanks, Skat! Didn't know I got placed...yay! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 6, 2015 at 2:27 PM

- Bravo, well done Laura - Good luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise :)

June 6, 2015 at 4:22 PM

Thanks, Anne Lise. Footles are fun :)

June 6, 2015 at 5:39 AM

delightful scenes on the beach, lol.. i was all in, laura.. very fine!.. a winner for me..huggs

June 6, 2015 at 1:21 PM

Thank you, sweet Nette! You are too kind :)

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