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Beach Footles Collaboration

Hot sun
What fun

Soft sand
How grand

Blue sea
For me

High tide
Surf side

Beach babe
In shade

Undress
Top less

No finds
Tan lines

Swim suit…
pursuit

He sports
Tight shorts

Romance?
No chance


Jan Allison
Casarah Nance
1st December 2014

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Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 10/29/2017 2:54:00 PM Very funny and charming! Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/18/2017 4:22:00 PM very charming. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2017 4:25:00 PM thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels Date: 3/20/2017 4:02:00 PM That's great!! These Footles are a lot of fun. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2017 4:25:00 PM Thanks John sorry I missed replying until now:-( hugs jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/27/2016 2:42:00 PM Touche, Jan. Spot on collaboration. Now was Tim your better half? Just asking. Love this footle. Great job well done from the both of yous. Much love, RW. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/27/2016 3:28:00 PM Tim is tim Smith we joined soup around the same time also with casarah and Armand (Maurice yvonne) We used to have such fun writing collaboration poems together and called ourselves the four musky tears lol Hugs Jan xx

Richard Martins Date: 10/1/2016 7:32:00 AM Love it!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2016 7:25:00 PM I love the footle form Richard just a few words can be very amusing:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenny Gazbowski Date: 5/14/2016 4:43:00 PM Loved this wonderful collaboration. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2016 7:23:00 PM thanks Lenny am so sorry I missed replying before:-) hugs Jan xx

Sean Kelly Date: 12/20/2014 1:46:00 PM Well Done : Have Fun ... High Tide : New Bride ... Sea Shore : Please More ! .. Well done you 2 , and keep on "footling" , it aint easy , but it;s fun ... Tks for your kind comments .. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/20/2014 1:52:00 PM I love footling around Sean (don't tell my hubby lol) Hugs Jan xxx

Ovidiu Bocsa Date: 12/9/2014 12:22:00 PM Well done: Much fun. Good sun Can run Good art In Heart Each man Love Jan Love you Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/9/2014 12:57:00 PM Thanks so much Ovidiu:-) Hug Jan x

Darlene Gifford Date: 12/2/2014 12:27:00 PM Congrats, you, two! Great footles! A 7 for sure. I really enjoyed these and it's a save for me. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 12:28:00 PM Thanks so much Darlene:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser Date: 12/2/2014 12:24:00 PM Nice one girls, love this set of Footles :) xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 12:27:00 PM Thanks so much James I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs jan xxx

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 12/2/2014 7:59:00 AM nicely done day at the beach ,smiles all around Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 10:29:00 AM Thanks Robert:-) Hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/2/2014 7:23:00 AM love this Jan and casarah hugs 7 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 10:29:00 AM Thanks so much Shadow:-) Hugs Jan x

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/2/2014 5:47:00 AM Dreaming of summer before the winter starts? Well, when you write in such a grand way it is allowed. Pleasing to read. Left me with a smile " watching" beauties undress! Ha-ha! Wonderful dear, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 6:45:00 AM We had fun writing these together Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 12/2/2014 4:18:00 AM "Undress/ Top less" funny quark, only top? (but) Romance?/ No chance Very unfair Jan/Cas...fun and fun Love . God bless XXXXX rajat Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 6:44:00 AM LOL Rajat - we could have continued the poem with other footles - better to leave the reader wanting more :-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/2/2014 2:28:00 AM this is fun , cas and jan... I like all though 'swim suit.. pursuit' stands our for me! you go, girllls!.. huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 6:43:00 AM Thanks Nette I was in need of some fun and Cas helped me smile again:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2014 10:46:00 PM hahaha. who did the last two? They made the ending so good. These are wonderful , you guys. GREAT work. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 1:13:00 AM We never tell who wrote which line - you should know my style by now ;-) - I needed fun in my life yesterday!!!! Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith Date: 12/1/2014 9:59:00 PM Great footles...hey Jan....nice tan....hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 1:11:00 AM I'm the white one in the corner! Hugs Jan x

Joseph May Date: 12/1/2014 8:11:00 PM Very nice footles Jan...nicely penned... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 1:11:00 AM Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan x

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/1/2014 7:19:00 PM Great collaboration. It looks and reads like lots of fun. 7 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 1:11:00 AM Thanks Brenda - we had fun:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/1/2014 6:39:00 PM I thought the best line was topless! When do the three of us meet and at what beach and just to be a good sport I will go topless too. A Fav! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 1:10:00 AM LOL you go topless I don't ha ha ha:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop Date: 12/1/2014 5:51:00 PM I read the other collab on Cas..and I read this from yours.Its grest to feel you better Jan x..Make me yearn for summer.Reminds me of the song-Girls just wanna have fun : ) Lovely! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/1/2014 5:52:00 PM Thanks Charmaine have had a few massive knocks lately but i will get by! hugs jan x

Casarah Nance Date: 12/1/2014 5:44:00 PM That was fun :) Thank you for bringing me lots to smile about! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/1/2014 5:47:00 PM me too Cas - think we both needed our spirits lifting:-) Turned out great my friend:-) hugs Jan xx