Jan Allison Poet Footle

Beach Footles Collaboration

Hot sun
What fun

Soft sand
How grand

Blue sea
For me

High tide
Surf side

Beach babe
In shade

Undress
Top less

No finds
Tan lines

Swim suit…
pursuit

He sports
Tight shorts

Romance?
No chance


Jan Allison
Casarah Nance
1st December 2014

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Dale Gregory Cozart October 29, 2017 at 2:54 PM Very funny and charming!

Line Gauthier September 18, 2017 at 4:22 PM very charming. Jan Allison September 18, 2017 at 4:25 PM thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels March 20, 2017 at 4:02 PM That's great!! These Footles are a lot of fun. Jan Allison September 18, 2017 at 4:25 PM Thanks John sorry I missed replying until now:-( hugs jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 27, 2016 at 2:42 PM Touche, Jan. Spot on collaboration. Now was Tim your better half? Just asking. Love this footle. Great job well done from the both of yous. Much love, RW. Jan Allison October 27, 2016 at 3:28 PM Tim is tim Smith we joined soup around the same time also with casarah and Armand (Maurice yvonne) We used to have such fun writing collaboration poems together and called ourselves the four musky tears lol Hugs Jan xx

Richard Martins October 1, 2016 at 7:32 AM Love it!! Jan Allison October 1, 2016 at 7:25 PM I love the footle form Richard just a few words can be very amusing:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenny Gazbowski May 14, 2016 at 4:43 PM Loved this wonderful collaboration. Jan Allison October 1, 2016 at 7:23 PM thanks Lenny am so sorry I missed replying before:-) hugs Jan xx

Sean Kelly December 20, 2014 at 1:46 PM Well Done : Have Fun ... High Tide : New Bride ... Sea Shore : Please More ! .. Well done you 2 , and keep on "footling" , it aint easy , but it;s fun ... Tks for your kind comments .. Jan Allison December 20, 2014 at 1:52 PM I love footling around Sean (don't tell my hubby lol) Hugs Jan xxx

Ovidiu Bocsa December 9, 2014 at 12:22 PM Well done: Much fun. Good sun Can run Good art In Heart Each man Love Jan Love you Jan Allison December 9, 2014 at 12:57 PM Thanks so much Ovidiu:-) Hug Jan x

Darlene Gifford December 2, 2014 at 12:27 PM Congrats, you, two! Great footles! A 7 for sure. I really enjoyed these and it's a save for me. Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 12:28 PM Thanks so much Darlene:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser December 2, 2014 at 12:24 PM Nice one girls, love this set of Footles :) xx Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 12:27 PM Thanks so much James I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs jan xxx

Robert Stoner Jr December 2, 2014 at 7:59 AM nicely done day at the beach ,smiles all around Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 10:29 AM Thanks Robert:-) Hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton December 2, 2014 at 7:23 AM love this Jan and casarah hugs 7 Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 10:29 AM Thanks so much Shadow:-) Hugs Jan x

Demetrios Trifiatis December 2, 2014 at 5:47 AM Dreaming of summer before the winter starts? Well, when you write in such a grand way it is allowed. Pleasing to read. Left me with a smile " watching" beauties undress! Ha-ha! Wonderful dear, Jan! Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 6:45 AM We had fun writing these together Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 2, 2014 at 4:18 AM "Undress/ Top less" funny quark, only top? (but) Romance?/ No chance Very unfair Jan/Cas...fun and fun Love . God bless XXXXX rajat Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 6:44 AM LOL Rajat - we could have continued the poem with other footles - better to leave the reader wanting more :-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud December 2, 2014 at 2:28 AM this is fun , cas and jan... I like all though 'swim suit.. pursuit' stands our for me! you go, girllls!.. huggs Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 6:43 AM Thanks Nette I was in need of some fun and Cas helped me smile again:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2014 at 10:46 PM hahaha. who did the last two? They made the ending so good. These are wonderful , you guys. GREAT work. Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:13 AM We never tell who wrote which line - you should know my style by now ;-) - I needed fun in my life yesterday!!!! Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith December 1, 2014 at 9:59 PM Great footles...hey Jan....nice tan....hugs Tim Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:11 AM I'm the white one in the corner! Hugs Jan x

Joseph May December 1, 2014 at 8:11 PM Very nice footles Jan...nicely penned... Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:11 AM Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan x

Brenda Meier-Hans December 1, 2014 at 7:19 PM Great collaboration. It looks and reads like lots of fun. 7 Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:11 AM Thanks Brenda - we had fun:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne December 1, 2014 at 6:39 PM I thought the best line was topless! When do the three of us meet and at what beach and just to be a good sport I will go topless too. A Fav! Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:10 AM LOL you go topless I don't ha ha ha:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop December 1, 2014 at 5:51 PM I read the other collab on Cas..and I read this from yours.Its grest to feel you better Jan x..Make me yearn for summer.Reminds me of the song-Girls just wanna have fun : ) Lovely! Jan Allison December 1, 2014 at 5:52 PM Thanks Charmaine have had a few massive knocks lately but i will get by! hugs jan x

Casarah Nance December 1, 2014 at 5:44 PM That was fun :) Thank you for bringing me lots to smile about! Hugs xxx Jan Allison December 1, 2014 at 5:47 PM me too Cas - think we both needed our spirits lifting:-) Turned out great my friend:-) hugs Jan xx