Beach Church

"Everyday, people stray 
away from the church and go 
back to God."  -  Lenny Bruce  


I kneel upon an ocean beach to pay 
attention to some creature in the sand.  
A choir of seagulls breaks out in song and 
swells my soul and the surf roars, “Let us spray.”  

Many little crabs scurry amongst the rocks 
to take up a collection of what there 
is there of sustenance.  Their simple prayer: 
"Please, feed us and save us from wild bird flocks.”  

The sea tide rushes in and through crevices 
it bursts; I hear its word whilst it sings me 
a doxology for the trinity 
as beautiful as any church services. 

The only thing I miss is the sermon.  
Nonetheless, I feel a better person.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Congrats John on a wonderful win for this brilliant creative write luv... enjoy ..kudos..
Quigley Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Beautifully written John. Congratulations on you win
Lane Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Well done. Excellent poem.
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Yes, if one goes out in nature and doesn't see and feel God something is wrong..Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats..Sara
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Congratulations on your win John in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 4:56 PM
why should church be confined to a building? Lovely idea you give John. While the poem has a feeling of serenity, the last line of 1st verse threw me with giggles. :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 12:56 AM
wow, john, What a splendid sonnet you did. I did mine like a sonnet too but with an actual church. However, I really enjoyed your meaning of YOUR sonnet. Very innovative! One of the best in the contest. Just catching you as I get ready to finally go off here. LUv,Andrea
Jones Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 6:37 PM
I love it that it sings me... and I love this poem. Thanks, JS. ~N
La France Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Thank you for this lovely entry, I am sending you a soupmail in a moment ~~
Lane Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 2:29 PM
He is everywhere. Tony
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