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Beach, I went sunburnt, Evidently, I learnt, Across the road , Cantered cane toads, Henry thought it’s fine, Bull mastiff Jerry Hog's, Laugh's at every bodies dogs, A growling all the time . No body wore their togs, Kangaroos were banned, Elisa sat and did count frogs, Too hot the ladies fanned, But later on the Hog had gone, I thought he did it nicely, Not the dog on the grog, Go a bit unsound precisely, Over dog diddle cocked leg widdle, worn so nicely. for Linda Marie's "Beach Blanket Bingo" contest 5-jul-11 Don Johnson

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Date: 7/11/2011 9:19:00 PM
Sooooo you do know how to do an ACROTIC ;) add a verse using ALLITERATION....singly a simple session showing the same first letter...abc' easy peezy! write out the alphabet and using each letter in order tell a story![put the word stop in each OR halt OR end etc] done in under 5 minutes i did it?
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Date: 7/7/2011 5:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:22:00 PM
Whoa - again I am not sure of the words and what all they really mean but I like your style. Mike
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations Don on your win in Linda-Marie's "Beach Blanket Bingo" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:47:00 PM
this one had some funny images in it, Don.SUre love when you mention the kangeroo! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:11:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of linda, Don
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations Cousin on a very funny poem and giving me a giggle. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:00:00 PM
Congrats DON on your top ten win with this awesome entry luv...thankxxx..
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Date: 7/5/2011 7:42:00 AM
The things that can happen on a beach, eh? Never a dull moment! Interesting stuff! Good luck in the contest. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:09:00 AM
Interesting one..Have no idea what you are saying but good luck..Reads like one that Linda-Marie will find great..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Dog With Clean Teeth"..Yes, my son told that happened when he was about 9 years old and Doris was around 5 years old..My son didn't stand to close to the tooth brush anyway..Sara
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