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Beach

Between vast sea and land
  Bulging waves come and dance
    Breeze gently soothes dry sand
      By dusk sun turns orange
        Birds return to their nest
          Beautiful sandcastles
            Breathtaking scene at shore.



August 16, 2016.
Pleiades B - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

(1 word title starting with B, 7 lines each starting with B, 6 syllables in each line, Each line must describe or tell about the title)

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Beautiful Scars Date: 9/6/2016 6:32:00 AM Congrats on your well deserved first place win lovely Meenakshi! :)-luloo Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 8/20/2016 10:51:00 AM Knew this was good, congrat's on a fine win! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/20/2016 10:15:00 AM Breathtaking imagery, Meenakshi!! Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 8/20/2016 8:57:00 AM Meenakshi, lovely poem and congratulations on your First Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/20/2016 7:35:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/20/2016 4:10:00 AM Awesome Meenakshi! Congratulations on your deserving First place win! ; ) 7 Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/20/2016 2:46:00 AM What a lovely way to describe a beach:) Outstanding piece:) Congratulations on your well deserved win, Meenakshi:) Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 8/19/2016 9:37:00 PM Congrats Meenakshi to win the top place. Love. where is your home town/ Login to Reply Meenakshi Raina Date: 8/19/2016 10:43:00 PM Thanks Anisha....I was born in India but now live in Canada.

Charlie Smith Date: 8/19/2016 8:54:00 PM Beautiful bevy of b's Meenakshi, congratulations... Login to Reply Meenakshi Raina Date: 8/19/2016 10:44:00 PM Thanks Charlie...

Kim Merryman Date: 8/19/2016 7:37:00 PM Media's, congrats on your 1st place win! Beautiful imagery painted a vivid beach scene. Blessings! Login to Reply Meenakshi Raina Date: 8/19/2016 10:45:00 PM Thanks Kim for my top placement.... Kim Merryman Date: 8/19/2016 9:07:00 PM Meenakshi, I apologize for your name in my first comment. My tablet keeps changing letters in words it doesn't recognize. So sorry.

John Hamilton Date: 8/17/2016 10:22:00 AM We are of the same mind on this one, I like yours better however. Very well done! Login to Reply Meenakshi Raina Date: 8/17/2016 12:14:00 PM Thanks John...I read yours and I liked it.

Jan Allison Date: 8/17/2016 6:01:00 AM Beautifully descriptive Meenakshi - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Meenakshi Raina Date: 8/17/2016 12:14:00 PM Thanks Jan...