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Beach

Between vast sea and land Bulging waves come and dance Breeze gently soothes dry sand By dusk sun turns orange Birds return to their nest Beautiful sandcastles Breathtaking scene at shore. August 16, 2016. Pleiades B - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman (1 word title starting with B, 7 lines each starting with B, 6 syllables in each line, Each line must describe or tell about the title)

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Date: 9/6/2016 6:32:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved first place win lovely Meenakshi! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/20/2016 10:51:00 AM
Knew this was good, congrat's on a fine win!
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Date: 8/20/2016 10:15:00 AM
Breathtaking imagery, Meenakshi!! Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/20/2016 8:57:00 AM
Meenakshi, lovely poem and congratulations on your First Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/20/2016 7:35:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/20/2016 4:10:00 AM
Awesome Meenakshi! Congratulations on your deserving First place win! ; ) 7
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Date: 8/20/2016 2:46:00 AM
What a lovely way to describe a beach:) Outstanding piece:) Congratulations on your well deserved win, Meenakshi:)
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Date: 8/19/2016 9:37:00 PM
Congrats Meenakshi to win the top place. Love. where is your home town/
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 8/19/2016 10:43:00 PM
Thanks Anisha....I was born in India but now live in Canada.
Date: 8/19/2016 8:54:00 PM
Beautiful bevy of b's Meenakshi, congratulations...
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 8/19/2016 10:44:00 PM
Thanks Charlie...
Date: 8/19/2016 7:37:00 PM
Media's, congrats on your 1st place win! Beautiful imagery painted a vivid beach scene. Blessings!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 8/19/2016 10:45:00 PM
Thanks Kim for my top placement....
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 9:07:00 PM
Meenakshi, I apologize for your name in my first comment. My tablet keeps changing letters in words it doesn't recognize. So sorry.
Date: 8/17/2016 10:22:00 AM
We are of the same mind on this one, I like yours better however. Very well done!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 8/17/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thanks John...I read yours and I liked it.
Date: 8/17/2016 6:01:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive Meenakshi - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 8/17/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Jan...

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