Meenakshi Raina Poet Verse

Beach

Between vast sea and land
  Bulging waves come and dance
    Breeze gently soothes dry sand
      By dusk sun turns orange
        Birds return to their nest
          Beautiful sandcastles
            Breathtaking scene at shore.



August 16, 2016.
Pleiades B - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

(1 word title starting with B, 7 lines each starting with B, 6 syllables in each line, Each line must describe or tell about the title)

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Beautiful Scars September 6, 2016 at 6:32 AM Congrats on your well deserved first place win lovely Meenakshi! :)-luloo

John Hamilton August 20, 2016 at 10:51 AM Knew this was good, congrat's on a fine win!

Paul Callus August 20, 2016 at 10:15 AM Breathtaking imagery, Meenakshi!! Congratulations on your high flying win! Regards // paul

Sandra Haight August 20, 2016 at 8:57 AM Meenakshi, lovely poem and congratulations on your First Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison August 20, 2016 at 7:35 AM Dropping back with my congrats Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2016 at 4:10 AM Awesome Meenakshi! Congratulations on your deserving First place win! ; ) 7

Joanna Daniel August 20, 2016 at 2:46 AM What a lovely way to describe a beach:) Outstanding piece:) Congratulations on your well deserved win, Meenakshi:)

Anisha Dutta August 19, 2016 at 9:37 PM Congrats Meenakshi to win the top place. Love. where is your home town/ Meenakshi Raina August 19, 2016 at 10:43 PM Thanks Anisha....I was born in India but now live in Canada.

Charlie Smith August 19, 2016 at 8:54 PM Beautiful bevy of b's Meenakshi, congratulations... Meenakshi Raina August 19, 2016 at 10:44 PM Thanks Charlie...

Kim Merryman August 19, 2016 at 7:37 PM Media's, congrats on your 1st place win! Beautiful imagery painted a vivid beach scene. Blessings! Meenakshi Raina August 19, 2016 at 10:45 PM Thanks Kim for my top placement.... Kim Merryman August 19, 2016 at 9:07 PM Meenakshi, I apologize for your name in my first comment. My tablet keeps changing letters in words it doesn't recognize. So sorry.

John Hamilton August 17, 2016 at 10:22 AM We are of the same mind on this one, I like yours better however. Very well done! Meenakshi Raina August 17, 2016 at 12:14 PM Thanks John...I read yours and I liked it.

Jan Allison August 17, 2016 at 6:01 AM Beautifully descriptive Meenakshi - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Meenakshi Raina August 17, 2016 at 12:14 PM Thanks Jan...