Beach

Sea shells on the beach,
the tide swiftly moving in,
mist hit"s your body,
a calm washes over you,
feeling soulful and so free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:47 PM
I was delighted to see this in the winner's circle, Susan. Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:29 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, susan
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Congratulations Susan on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 8:57 PM
A lovely memory. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:34 PM
BEauty in feelng! Congrats, susan. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Congrats Susan on your HM in Rick's Tanka contest... awesome piece.. your numbers on your member page will change if u win in the top ten.. so keep entering the contests... good luck..enjoy your honor..luv..
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August 26, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Nice write....enjoyed.. Michael
Devonshire Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 1:45 PM
Your tanka leaves the reader feeling relaxed and refreshed. Very nice, Susan! Love, Carolyn
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