Beach

turqouise waters clouds drifting above palm trees ~ noisy gulls fly by 8-12-2022 Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Checked with HMS

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2022 1:03:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one. I have always loved going to the beach-ocean from time to time but after seeing the destruction by Ian, it gives me second thoughts. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by to say congratulations and letting me know I placed in your contest. Thank you for the honor of being on the list. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/13/2022 10:08:00 AM

What a perfect picture you describe dear friend, one of beauty and tranquility. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/13/2022 8:04:00 AM

The noisy gulls really stand out in this peaceful poem. Nice Haiku :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/13/2022 12:46:00 AM

Brilliant haiku. I can just picture the imagery. Well done.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/12/2022 7:33:00 PM

Such a lovely scene you have painted with your words. I can see myself there, watching clouds drift, while embracing the calm. This is beautiful in every way. :) Hugs, Brandy