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molten gold kiss shores cobalt sky hugs sea enthralling serene beach 26-11-2021 Syllables checked at PS

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Date: 12/13/2021 11:19:00 AM
I love your "beach - Hiku" write and pretty picture. I wish I was walking that beach of yours. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........................
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Date: 12/9/2021 12:31:00 AM
very nice Rama! Must be the golden beech in chennai!
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Date: 12/4/2021 6:37:00 AM
Wow Rama I don't think anyone could describe this splendid scene better than you have in both visual and poetic form. Kudos. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/3/2021 8:31:00 AM
Very picturesque work. Beautiful image added as well.
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Date: 11/30/2021 12:52:00 PM
WoW! Beautifully described. Love it. The picture fits beautifully. Wonderful verse. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/26/2021 11:09:00 AM
Love the image you created in the readers mind. Enjoy your weekend Rama. Tom
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Date: 11/26/2021 8:49:00 PM
Thanks. Hope you too have a fabulous one