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Beach -- EL

I love walking on the beach
  
The blue water takes my speech
  
What a hot day filled with sun
  
I must not get too well done
  
Look at the pretty green trees
  
They are filled with honey bees
 
I love walking on the beach
 
Date Written: 7/5/2021
 
2 Place
 
Elemental Contest Judged: 7/31/2021
 
Sponsored by: charles
  

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Date: 7/31/2021 10:00:00 AM
Congrats! Beautifully written..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this summer/fun write. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 7/31/2021 5:10:00 AM
A wonderful write, Paula. I truly enjoyed this summery poem. Congratulations on your win... Charlie
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 8:52:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. I enjoyed writing this fun beach Haiku. Glad you like this summer write. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 7/31/2021 4:32:00 AM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 7/11/2021 3:25:00 AM
Your delightful poem is very tempting, Paula. I love swimming, though nowadays I have become more wary of too much sun! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/11/2021 9:13:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. I love the beach but try to stay out of the sun. I still love the water/sand. Early AM or later PM I find is the best time. Have a blessed Sunday..................
Date: 7/10/2021 12:11:00 PM
Great imagery. beaches are best place to go on summer. All the best for contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/10/2021 12:19:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your best. Glad you like this fun beach write. I love the beach any time of the year. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 7/7/2021 12:07:00 PM
I think you got the essence of this form very well. I enjoyed this one!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this fun write. I love the beach. Have a blessed day...............
Date: 7/6/2021 7:43:00 AM
Paula, I love Poetry like this. So clear, so very, cool! I felt like I was was walking with you. Pangie xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2021 9:08:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this fun beach write. I thought someone was walking with me. Have a blessed day...............
Date: 7/5/2021 9:43:00 PM
Simple and sweet, Paula:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2021 9:07:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this beach write. Have a blessed day..................