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Beach -- El

I love walking on the beach The blue water takes my speech What a hot day filled with sun I must not get too well done Look at the pretty green trees They are filled with honey bees I love walking on the beach Date Written: 7/5/2021 2 Place Elemental Contest Judged: 7/31/2021 Sponsored by: charles

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Bhawana Pant

Date: 7/31/2021 10:00:00 AM

Congrats! Beautifully written..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2021 11:18:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this summer/fun write. Have a blessed day..................

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 5:10:00 AM

A wonderful write, Paula. I truly enjoyed this summery poem. Congratulations on your win... Charlie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 8:52:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. I enjoyed writing this fun beach Haiku. Glad you like this summer write. Have a blessed day..................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:32:00 AM

Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 8:49:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day..................

Paul Callus

Date: 7/11/2021 3:25:00 AM

Your delightful poem is very tempting, Paula. I love swimming, though nowadays I have become more wary of too much sun! ~ Warm regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/11/2021 9:13:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. I love the beach but try to stay out of the sun. I still love the water/sand. Early AM or later PM I find is the best time. Have a blessed Sunday..................

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/10/2021 12:11:00 PM

Great imagery. beaches are best place to go on summer. All the best for contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/10/2021 12:19:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your best. Glad you like this fun beach write. I love the beach any time of the year. Have a blessed day..................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2021 12:07:00 PM

I think you got the essence of this form very well. I enjoyed this one!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2021 9:59:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this fun write. I love the beach. Have a blessed day...............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/6/2021 7:43:00 AM

Paula, I love Poetry like this. So clear, so very, cool! I felt like I was was walking with you. Pangie xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2021 9:08:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this fun beach write. I thought someone was walking with me. Have a blessed day...............

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/5/2021 9:43:00 PM

Simple and sweet, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2021 9:07:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this beach write. Have a blessed day..................