Be Wary

Dark alleyways loom, Within the dreamtime cities; Foreboding horrors; Of which I dare not mention. Beware alleyways of mind.

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Mansi Sharma

Date: 8/17/2017 7:20:00 PM

Truth! I admit I have a grey yet paved alleyway! Liked it!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/21/2017 3:55:00 PM

Thank you

Paul Callus

Date: 8/9/2017 12:58:00 AM

Yours is a very expressive poem, ML. The haunting alleyways of the mind can turn out to be much worse than real alleyways! Regards // paul

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/9/2017 9:29:00 PM

Sometimes yes. I'm glad you stopped by and thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2017 3:29:00 PM

Yes, the alleyways of the mind make for dark things which then happen in the actual alleyways of the cities! (I sure don't want those dark places in my lovely dreams!!)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/9/2017 9:46:00 PM

Nightmares from childhood;once I journaled them; the dark disappeared; thanks so much for commenting.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/8/2017 10:37:00 AM

True. Lovely thought!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/9/2017 9:47:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting.